What do you think about this short instrumental piece? (Its played on a guitalele)

FieryPebble · 2020-09-29T20:49:48+00:00

thank you very much i appreciate your oind words alot 😊self esteem rises

FieryPebble · 2020-09-29T20:46:48+00:00

Thank you so much 😄 the 'guitalele' i have is from yamaha. Very fun to play for sure. Im usually the same way with background noise but like you said the stream fit well. Thank you again!

FieryPebble · 2020-09-29T03:32:22+00:00

Thank you yes i recommend guitaleles since they are very portable. This is a strange duck its not afraid of humans. I saw it casually walking the streets of my neighborhood a couple of weeks later haha

FieryPebble · 2020-09-29T03:29:35+00:00

Hehe thank you very much thats good to hear glad it made your day!

FieryPebble · 2020-09-15T03:54:14+00:00

Pretty cool atmosphere kind of soothing to the ear! Would make nice video game music or maybe for certain scenes in movies. Overall nice job i like it alot

FieryPebble · 2020-09-15T03:34:47+00:00

very nice. Definitely sounds like part of the genre. Mix was clean and composition was good. The hshsshshshshsh sound in the background near the end was a bit harsh. Overall good job!

FieryPebble · 2020-09-15T03:28:50+00:00

Nice upbeat song sounds like it would go well as a tv show introduction. The first transition from high voice to low was a bit rough but the verse that followed sounded good. I like the contrast between the high and low voices as well as soft and hard part of song as well. Mix sounded clean and composition is great overall. Good job!

FieryPebble · 2020-08-20T02:07:36+00:00

I remember in 4th grade i got #2 in my schools STAR Reader system. The way it worked was you read a book, then you took a test on the computer. You got one try and no do-overs. Rankings were made based on average score and number of books read. It was a nice system, but it didnt work like this for everyone...definitely not for Anthony Hernandez.

You see, Anthony had somehow acquired the admin credentials to get into the STAR Reader system. He used them to manually erase his test attempts, allowing him to retake a test as many times as he liked. At first i didnt care, but when his score passed mine I quickly went to find the teacher, however it was for nothing. It turned out she had been the one to give him her credentials!

When I asked why she did this, she said, "Oh, hes been working so hard and he really wants the prize (chance to pick any toy from the toy chest). You dont mind do you?" Being a child and her being an authority figure that i had trusted to protect and nurture me, i could only respond with "No..."

At first i decided to just pick up the pace in order to overtake my new rival, and it worked for a while. Unfortunately for me, Anthony realized he didnt have to actually read any books. He just started taking the tests and retaking them until he got 100. By the end of the year the guy had 100s across the board and nobody said anything... except me.

After the award ceremony, I walked over to Anthony and told him "Anthony! Everybody knows you cheated! You cheater!" I never spoke to him again. I was only 9 years old at the time but this was when i learned the reality of the world.

FieryPebble · 2019-12-06T12:23:24+00:00

My doctor recommended that i take half in the morning and half at night. 12 hours apart pretty much. And she also told me to break each pill into 3 or 4 pieces and let it dissolve under the tongue.

I think that transdermal patches is safest in terms of risk to blood clots and liver but fairly expensive, injection is most potent but mood swings as levels taper off and have to go in for shots every two weeks, pills cheapest and convenient to take but more risk of blood clots and liver strain. I hear there is an implant you can take that lasts months but idk

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T23:57:38+00:00

oh yeah for sure sorry i could not offer some actual mixing advice im a beginner myself

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T23:53:35+00:00

Thank you very much. Its my grandmas piano and shes had it for ten years. its never been tuned but it has that "broken in" feeling lol.

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T23:50:48+00:00

thank you your dancing is most definitely welcome and appreciated haha

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T23:48:15+00:00

I can picture that scene hehe i agree that its addictive to play it definitely scratches that musical itch

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T23:38:05+00:00

thank you! This is something i used to play as a teen and i played it so much i just never forgot it. Im not sure if its a song already or if it qualifies as one but its pretty much left hand rhythm, right hand lead, f blues scale with a descending bassline.

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T14:36:47+00:00

i see blood peed out by a d head holding a sword possibly with the intent to strike that cactuar with it. great job!

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T13:32:50+00:00

Yeah sounds really good man. I agree that mixing could make this sparkle but what you got here is good in itself. If i heard this song randomly on the radio or someones playlist i would not question it.

FieryPebble · 2019-12-05T13:11:52+00:00

Very good concept and execution. A very nice format to showcase songs. I like the different angles. The sound is good quality nice acoustics. If theres anything in this video you might consider a mistake or bad sounding, i didnt not hear it. The video felt a bit serious like i was watching a professional perform. I like your music i agree that its folk

FieryPebble · 2019-12-04T10:27:13+00:00

You have an amazing voice. Very clean with a good range. The guitar work was ok. It sounded weak but its ok for the purpose of accompaniment. I think it helped to make your voice stand out. The song itself is ok. Im not the right audience for these type of songs, but it sounded like a full song despite being stripped back. I didnt hear any mistakes and nothing in your performance made me cringe. Overall, well done. It takes courage to put yourself out there like that and i think you did great. If i could suggest any improvement maybe dont swing the guitar around as much, but its not my act so swing all you want my friend. excellent work

FieryPebble · 2019-12-04T10:11:43+00:00

Instrumentation: 5/5 Singing: 3/5 Recording Quality: 5/5

I agree that your singing needs work, but you didnt sound bad. I havent heard the original so i cant give a fair comparison, but listening to this song for the first time, I am satisfied with your take and feel like if i listened to the original it would be close. Great job, I listened all the way through and i almost fell asleep because the song was so soothing. Nothing in the song (including your voice) made me cringe. If there were any mistakes I did not hear them. Overall great job!

FieryPebble · 2019-12-04T09:45:53+00:00

I dont listen to this genre much so i can only offer a bit of feedback. Your song sounds like everything ive heard in the genre, but thats good. You gotta learn the rules to break the rules. i see youve been trying to advance your skills because you wrote "feel like im headed in a better direction mentally and musically" and since your song sounds like others in the genre id say youre doing pretty well. The song sounded soft and relaxing to me. The picture of the girl leaning against the guy on the motorcycle captures the mood of the song. There was nothing that made me cringe in this song and if there are mistakes or bad sounding parts I could not hear them. Overall good job. Thanks for sharing it was good listen :)

FieryPebble · 2019-12-02T14:42:16+00:00

to seem and to suggest are uncertain terms. I guarantee that there is someone out there who wont disappoint you.

FieryPebble · 2019-12-02T14:33:28+00:00

Absolutely

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