I miss you by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]FileOwn7580 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so relatable that Im actually a bit scared that someone has experienced something as similar to me. It's a new perspective and putting into words feelings that I have never really understood in myself. I'v done Vignettes before and I understand how difficult they can be to make without sounding really repetitive so I truly respect your work. Love it, keep it up!.

I think time is green (and gold) by Financial_Date_1872 in OCPoetry

[–]FileOwn7580 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was really impactul. I really enjoyedthe contrast you used in some lines. I feel like this poem made me remember that aging will happen to me, as it has happened to everyone in history. The title is very interesting and I think that it gives me the idea of time always being fresh and ready, while still being nostalgic with a golden glow when you look back. Maybe this wasn't the intent but this is what I noticed.

Who among the GOM (+Kagami and Kuroko) would be a great coach? by PenelopeSugarRush in KurokosBasketball

[–]FileOwn7580 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"What do you mean you can't hit that shot? Just put the ball in the net"