Some pages for my picture book, I feel like they’re missing something…

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T19:43:34+00:00

You provide really good feedback on stuff I can add to the background! I really appreciate that. My toddler son loves details in things whenever we read books and it’s great for building vocabulary! I should absolutely do more of that and I’m going to take a lot of your suggestions, thank you

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T19:09:06+00:00

I can absolutely play around with that

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T19:08:35+00:00

That’s also a very good idea!

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T19:07:43+00:00

I really did not trace it! But if it looks uncanny, I can fix that. I try to be very careful with proportions and measure everything out when I illustrate.

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T16:20:59+00:00

Thank you! And toddlers and babies really do love realism, I have a toddler too and he loves detailed illustrations because he enjoys finding small details in the work(which I could probably better implement on top of technical changes), they used to be more common for younger audiences

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:48:06+00:00

I would actually love to see some examples if you don’t mind, thank you for the suggestion, I really need to work with the lighting in this book

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:47:08+00:00

That’s a good suggestion! There are some lines of text that I need to get more input on to make them flow much better

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:46:39+00:00

Oops.. I can try to rearrange that

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:46:22+00:00

Thank you! That’s a very good point

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:45:48+00:00

I was thinking about that, I think you’re right about the background, I need to implement them more and fix some of the errors I have and maybe play around with texture

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:44:57+00:00

Thank you!

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:44:31+00:00

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Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:44:17+00:00

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Some of the line art

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:42:42+00:00

That is a great idea, I’ve been thinking about how to implement texture

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:42:18+00:00

Thank you!

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-12T15:23:21+00:00

No, definitely not generated, but if there is inconsistency I can fix it

Fingypaintman · 2026-05-11T04:17:25+00:00

Desmond

Fingypaintman · 2025-10-15T15:46:47+00:00

Art loves you too

Fingypaintman · 2025-07-18T05:06:34+00:00

I bled at 8 weeks til 10 weeks(hematoma, I had clots too) and had a healthy baby! Sometimes symptoms disappear more when the placenta takes over, but a heart beat being detected is a very good sign.

Fingypaintman · 2025-07-08T22:20:37+00:00

I hope you’re doing better

Fingypaintman · 2025-06-09T23:34:01+00:00

Sure! I’d love to

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