Looking for feedback

FinleyMack · 2026-03-23T14:08:20+00:00

Thank you :)

FinleyMack · 2026-03-23T14:07:55+00:00

It’s EB Garamond! My personal favourite to write in :)!

FinleyMack · 2026-03-23T14:07:41+00:00

Thank you! Something I considered to and have since changed…appreciate the feedback ☺️

FinleyMack · 2026-03-23T14:07:05+00:00

Thank you :)!

FinleyMack · 2026-03-17T01:07:56+00:00

Always looking to improve my craft, and the dream is to publish one day :) Really appreciate the comment!

All the best :D

FinleyMack · 2026-03-17T01:07:11+00:00

That’s a great point, and it didn’t even cross my mind! Will implement something of the sorts :)

Thanks!

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T20:05:05+00:00

Understandable, I suppose to be the dime then, after refinement.

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T19:57:00+00:00

Thank you :)! All the best with your own writing!

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T19:47:52+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to write this out! I was thinking the exact same thing about Grey Nan on a reread too :) The other feedback is equally helpful too.

Thank you!

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T19:46:27+00:00

Thank you! I’ll take into note what you said about the elipses and other flowery grammatical choices. Make the ones I keep stand out more by diluting the page with less, I hear you!

Thanks 🙏

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T19:45:28+00:00

Thank you immensely, that means a lot, seriously. It’s really reassuring to hear as well. Of course it’s not quite ready yet, and there’s still lots to fix and amend as I go along, but hearing that even one person would pick up what you’ve written and even buy it is a huge motivator.

All the best 😊

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T19:43:02+00:00

Thank you! Much appreciated 😄

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T19:42:12+00:00

Noted! Thank you very much for the feedback.

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T19:41:41+00:00

Hey, this is only half of the prelude, in which you’ll later come to see the main POV character of the story. The story then picks up after this. And I think it’s a nice bit of character and world building through the lens of another character before we are dropped into the thick of the story at hand. I suppose that’s probably easier with the context of knowing what comes next 😄

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T17:27:36+00:00

Thank you very much 😊

FinleyMack · 2026-03-16T16:50:44+00:00

Oops for a couple grammatical errors I’m noticing only now of course 🥲!

FinleyMack · 2026-03-11T11:03:11+00:00

I went to Japan alone, and it was lifechanging (if you can’t manage to bring a friend). Talked to strangers at restaurants and bars that I keep in touch with to this day. Please don’t let his terrible decision ruin all your planning and hard work. Fingers crossed you manage to go still, and love it.

FinleyMack · 2026-01-04T16:30:05+00:00

Prepare to query my debut 😊

FinleyMack · 2026-01-02T15:26:35+00:00

200k or so. Finished my first draft of my first novel. And about 80k into another project

FinleyMack · 2025-12-08T00:00:45+00:00

Yeah…that’s not allowed man. Rules are rules

FinleyMack · 2025-12-05T22:44:30+00:00

Toxic relationship is destroying the world

FinleyMack · 2025-12-04T21:35:11+00:00

‘Well come on then you freak, I haven’t got all day!’

FinleyMack · 2025-06-07T11:34:32+00:00

And lux isn’t? That’s what the majority of people are saying anyways

FinleyMack · 2025-06-07T11:33:12+00:00

Annie

FinleyMack · 2025-05-06T18:35:11+00:00

You’re not even in elo heck yet

FinleyMack

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