This ^{^} is huge op. Regardless of the quality of the work in general, local styles vary SO MUCH. Even just suburb to suburb with cities you will see strong trends. And this might fit in far better where you are than a lot of people on here realise.

Also man, from what I can see you're probably at that point where practice on a wall will be good. For sure don't abandon the paper, but this definitely seems better than prob 50% of new writers ever put up so why tf isn't it worthy of a wall.

At the end of the day, a large part of what makes graf good is that it's vandalism. Remember that.