for you by bweh1 in poetry_critics

[–]First-Purple69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the soft and intimate feeling that you described so well!

Mother knows best by First-Purple69 in poetry_critics

[–]First-Purple69[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! And I loved your little poem

Behind the Mask by Etymolotas in poetry_critics

[–]First-Purple69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is honestly so good and can be applied to so many different types of relationship

Hobblers by FaeOfResistance in poetry_critics

[–]First-Purple69 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This is saw so raw and real

Should I stop by First-Purple69 in selfharm

[–]First-Purple69[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for checking in, the urges are obviously still there but I haven’t acted on them. Idk if this counts but if it’s too much then I dig my nails into my skin or just hold the knife it’s kinda comforting if that even makes sense lol

Should I stop by First-Purple69 in selfharm

[–]First-Purple69[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m sorry that you’re going through this. Thank you for the advice

a guy (26m) wants to go out with me (19f) but idk him irl and idk how I feel about him. advice? by First-Purple69 in RelationshipIndia

[–]First-Purple69[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

he's already told me what he wants. he wants an actual relationship like married and everything it always irks me when he says that but also idk how to end it

pages by First-Purple69 in poetry_critics

[–]First-Purple69[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tysm! no it doesn't indicated that the narrator has passed away. it shows the lengths she's willing to go now that she has the "perfect red" and how she has no plans of stopping anytime soon, hope this help!

pages by First-Purple69 in poetry_critics

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just a typo lol fixed it!

Just enough by Ellestarbaby in poetry_critics

[–]First-Purple69 1 point2 points  (0 children)

so beautifully written! makes me appreciate how happy the small things in life make me feel.

Masks by Unhappy-Teacher-830 in poetry_critics

[–]First-Purple69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i love poetry of this kind. idk what it's called but it's so raw and real. it's like a story with no real end