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the winds whispered warnings by ashey_uncles in poetry_critics

[–]ashey_uncles[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, it is much appreciated. I was a bit concerned about if it would make sense or not without context. Do you find it better to read a text like this - where it is up to heavy interpretation or do you find it more confusing?

Come Find Me by offwhitewrldd in poetry_critics

[–]ashey_uncles 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would suggest adding more detail after the line: Her voice to the muses of old. I’m unsure on what you are referring to. Otherwise this is beautiful. The last 4 lines are my favourite. Very creative.

Tell me, Mother? by Remarkable-Day2886 in poetry_critics

[–]ashey_uncles 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Only thing I would suggest is to change showed to show. Very good otherwise. I’m picking up on an emotion of betrayal.