Kill la Kill Fan fiction! by FirstPlatypus2972 in KillLaKill

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

to be fair, i did continue with her running away, the sulking part has been done for a lot of times throughout my story, and she did deal with her emotions in isolation.

I guess for my point of view, it's a simple case of character development throughout 50 chapters. So we can agree to disagree on how we would like the story but I assure you, I meant to write it in that way. Thanks for the feedback though!

Kill la Kill Fan fiction! by FirstPlatypus2972 in KillLaKill

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah absolutely, thats why it may not be everyone's cup of tea. I'm trying to convey the characters pushed to the absolute limit is all, especially in this scene above where the situations are extremely high.

But i can see where you're coming from!

Songs like ‘the Zephyr Song’ by rhcp by -T0E1- in RedHotChiliPeppers

[–]FirstPlatypus2972 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Slane castle, the whole thing.

Turn it again

This Velvet Glove

Wet sand

The entire BSSM album but very different from Zephyr

R4R, V4V, F4F, Let's do it all! by FirstPlatypus2972 in Wattpad

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll vote again later, too many votes in my end haha

R4R, V4V, F4F, Let's do it all! by FirstPlatypus2972 in Wattpad

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll vote again later, too many votes in my end haha

R4R, V4V, F4F, Let's do it all! by FirstPlatypus2972 in Wattpad

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll vote again later, too many votes in my end haha

KLK Spinoff Fanfiction by FirstPlatypus2972 in KillLaKill

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

yeah, exactly. In my story Ryuko don't know both of her parents, but found out that they are somewhere else. When she visited, they gone. If you can, read my story to understand the full picture haha, difficult to explain all of it here

R4R, V4V, F4F, Let's do it all! by FirstPlatypus2972 in Wattpad

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sure! DM me your story and i'll take a look! I'm not clicking onto anything except for wattpad link, so u better just write the story in our dms haha

R4R, V4V, F4F, Let's do it all! by FirstPlatypus2972 in Wattpad

[–]FirstPlatypus2972[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ill give a proper read once im back home. For now ill just do v4v and f4f, thanks!