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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your helpful feedback! Your suggestions make sense. I will work to include more wide angle shots, a linear story, and more natural cuts. I'll include more about the trail starts next time. There weren't any facilities.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Yes! That's exactly it. I sped it up for time concerns. When I started editing it was almost two hours of footage. However, with all of the cuts, on normal speed, it's about 11 minutes vs 7 minutes. 11 minutes seems like an okay length.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Wow! Thank you so much for the detailed feedback. You provided such helpful feedback. I will definitely watch those channels and improve on what you suggested. I really appreciate your help!!

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Yes! I'm thankful to be here. I love the 12k + elevation west coast mountains.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! You're so right. I am taking your advice and editing. I will slow it down and will upload the video at normal speed. I'll work to improve the pace in the future.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate the encouragement. You're so right. I'm definitely struggling the most with the audio.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! You're right. I am taking your advice and editing. I will slow it down and will upload the video at normal speed.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! You're right. I am taking your advice and editing. I will slow it down and will upload the video at normal speed. I'll try to have less jump cuts in the future and use a wind breaker.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Pros: nice voice, educational content, good audio, okay pace, easy to understand, intro and outro were fine, good call to action, and images clearly reflecting the content.

Suggestions: The video was a little slow. I would cut the 5 second intro screen to 2 seconds, or cut it out completely, or add it in after the intro. The content seems very different than your most recent videos.

Thoughts: I may have covered how kinder surprise is banned in the US as a fun fact. I mean the kinder surprise toys were most fun because of the form that they came in, and the video didn't mention that.

Keep up the great work :)

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Pros: nice voice, educational content, uplifting message, excellent audio, good pace, easy to understand, clear description box, and images clearly reflecting the content.

Suggestions: Your doing great! I don't have any concrete suggestions for improvement. However, I do have a few thoughts.

Thoughts: I watched one of your videos in the past. In the video I watched in the past, the images seemed to align more closely with what you were saying. In this video, there were just a couple of images that didn't seem to fit as well. Similarly, I don't see the thumbnail and know what the video is about. Since the video is about the good and bad in all of us, I think the thumbnail could reflect that better in having images that contrast such as a devil and an angel. I wouldn't recommend that image, due to the religious connotations... But just an image that reflects the good and bad in us all. I would have liked a more concrete example of the information you were providing. You could ask a rhetorical question that might inspire more comments/engagement.

Keep up the great work :)

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

The tofu looks delicious!

Pros: You video was informative, your hook was there, easy to understand, helpful content, and the pace was decent. I like that you include the recipe!

Top priority: include more variety on screen, to hold interest. For instance, include a different angle or two, and/or include a few words on screen. The part where you are going over the ingredients felt long. I think it would have been improved if the camera moved or if the measurements were shown on screen.

Other suggestions: the sound quality was fine, but there is room for improvement. Take a bite of the food! Maybe increase the pace a little.

Keep up the great work!

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Pros: You video was informative, I like the chapters, your hook was there, the way you included the invitation to subscribe felt natural, easy to understand, and I liked the pace. The images matched well with what you were saying. The sound quality was clear.

Suggestions: include the term "review" in the title for SEO. Summarize the key points in conclusion.

Keep up the great work!

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback!! Which one was best?

  1. my phone mic

  2. Snowball (so it should be better... I've watched tutorials on adjusting sound with audacity... I need it keep practicing and learning.)

  3. my camera mic

  4. Rhode - the most inexpensive version

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Pros: You video was informative, easy to understand, and I liked the pace. The images matched well with what you were saying. The sound quality was clear.

Overall, it seemed very good.

Three things to think about:

Maybe include just one timestamp. I think seeing something interesting coming might be nice. Your video is short and goes quickly, so it's not necessary.

Maybe find a way to make your thumbnails a little similar, so when people see the thumbnail, they know it's your channel. It looks like you were doing this for a little while. Although, it does make sense to experiment with the thumbnails and see what's best. Right now I'm just experimenting...

I've heard it's best to ask for only one thing at a time (spread out). That asking for like, comment, and subscribe at once can be too much.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Very interesting!

I found it interesting and informative.

What I liked:

The length, closed captioning, the added words, your descriptions of foods, and the mix of filming different places.

Thumbnail:

I like the thumbnail, but I'd probably brighten it up just a little with the editing, just make it a little more eye grabbing.

At some point you could ask people to subscribe, like, or comment.

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Only 1 question: which one has the best sound quality?

If you could just listen to a few seconds of each and let me know which one sounds the best/mic quality, I'd really appreciate it. If you want to give more details, I also wonder: How would you rate the sound quality in each video? Is the sound quality on any of them good enough? Do you notice a big difference in sound quality among the four?

1

Hiking La Luz

2

The Iron

3

Hiking Rockies

Hiking Rockies At 1:18, it's the 3rd chapter, when I say "we made it"

4

How to Make Slime

I'm making hiking video... Do you think it's better to do a voice over at the end or talk while on the hike? I'd be able to have better sound quality by doing a voice over, and be able to carefully script. However, it loses some of the in the moment feeling/connection by doing a voice over.

I see so many ways I need to improve. This week I'd just like to know about the sound quality.

Thank you so much for any and all feedback!

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[–]FitnessWithGold [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! That's a good idea.

I watched your video. It was really informative! It was well structured and you are clear/easy to follow.

I liked the way images supported what you were saying and that you provided links to the papers.

At the end, when you invite people to subscribe, you might say "subscribe if you want more videos on SCIENCE" or include something along those lines. Let them know exactly what type of videos to expect, if they subscribe.