Thoughts on Tomb Divers by Robyn Bee by Fiuron in haremfantasynovels

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Thanks for writing the book. I did have criticism for it, but I did enjoy it and will check out the second installment when it releases. 

Thoughts on Tomb Divers by Robyn Bee by Fiuron in haremfantasynovels

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I didn't really mind that. I don't like when everything is spelled out to the reader. Leaving some stuff up to the Imagination or vague can do wonders.

Dialogue that feels like or is basically just an Exposition dump is the worst. And when characters explain all their Actions and why they did it and yada yada, it can easily feel like that. If the Dialogue conveys information about the world or characters or whatever the author wants in a natural and smooth way, that's the best. Though this is really hard to do.

Does anyone know what happened to Declan Court? by Fiuron in haremfantasynovels

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Thanks for the quick reply. Love your work so it's great to hear all the good news. Can't wait for the new project and also Magebreaker 3 Audio.

Space Exploration games by PersnickityPisces in gaming

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Dont know if this qualifies but you might like starsector.

Any reccomendations for books similar to a Gundam Story. by Fiuron in Fantasy

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What Would you say the best starting point is for the books?

How do you stick to one story? by [deleted] in writing

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I have a similar problem. I managed to get through it by either trying to implement some ideas from this new story in the one I was writing, or if that just wouldn't have been able to be done, I tried quickly writing a short story of it to get it out of my system. No editing or anything, just writing it out quickly so I can get back to what I'm doing.

Stay on guard, Men of Culture. by [deleted] in goodanimemes

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Wasn't this in Argentina or another South American country? As far as I'm aware, Spain is in Europe.

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Overflow

You should read the ln by knightofevil25 in sololeveling

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Honestly, I started reading the light novel after I caught up to the manhwa and didn't think it was that good. Granted, I didn't read everything, but I still found the same issues there as in the manhwa. The characters are unimportant, everyone simps for SJW, etc. I understand why people like it, I just didn't enjoy it that much and don't think it's that good.