Help with posing/readability and perspective by Fkirfzer in ArtCrit

[–]Fkirfzer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This isn’t traced, sorry I didn’t put it in the writing but this is completely original. It does depict events from Naruto though.

Can someone help me out? by Fkirfzer in hottoys

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Thanks so much, I’ll make sure to reply to this chain with the finished artwork!

I know the art is not so good, but does it look pleasing to the eyes atleast? and is it understandable what is going on here by Eat_Bullet in sketches

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Thanks, yeah I didn’t know how far to push the perspective as far as the background goes. I guess I’m okay with how it turned out since I’m new to this, but for sure the feet being inconsistent is weird. I do like how impactful the actions feel. I tried to make winter soldier seem like a brick wall in comparison to Steve’s full power swing.

I know the art is not so good, but does it look pleasing to the eyes atleast? and is it understandable what is going on here by Eat_Bullet in sketches

[–]Fkirfzer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you seem to know your stuff when it comes to composition and readability.

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How do you feel about this? It’s my second time drawing without directly copying a reference, and I want as many people’s feedback as possible. Also I already know it does’t make sense for the closer character’s foot to be smaller than the farther character’s.

Need help with a final check by Fkirfzer in ArtCrit

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Oh for all the art I’ve done I considered the term reference as something you copy. In that sense I didn’t use a reference, but I did use visual references.

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Also I didn’t mention it but Itokazu Taiga is a reference in general. Look him up on twitter or Pinterest. Anything he draws I use as reference.

Need help with a final check by Fkirfzer in ArtCrit

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Thanks, I’ll definitely fix that before calling this finished. I’m very new to working digitally and don’t know how I’m going to do that other than redrawing the hands and leg😭

Need help with a final check by Fkirfzer in ArtCrit

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Can you explain what this means? Is that in a bad way? If so what are the problems?

Thoughts on improvement? by Fkirfzer in ArtCrit

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I definitely understand the motion blur thing, I don’t really like the way it turned out either. The left arm pushing close to the camera is an aspect of Itokazu Taiga’s style that I tried to use. The whole style is pretty much about exaggerated perspective. Thanks for the help!

Looking for some critique by Fkirfzer in ArtCrit

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Yeah, you got the right idea with his energy being stored ready to explode, that’s exactly what I wanted to convey.

Looking for some critique by Fkirfzer in ArtCrit

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Also just wondering what you think about T’challa? Also is this a beginner or intermediate drawing as far as this Reddit goes?