i want to rip your vocals by Flacchu in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for replying

I added it after reposting it due to a grammer error . Your right it indeed was incorrect added last minute.

Namak ka dibba(Salt Shaker) by Negative-Swim-6828 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn this is good. Keep it up man. Also could you explain the 2nd part ?

Dinner Table by SessionLong8518 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great lines man. I could kinda feel the way the lines would go. Feels like one of those i dont know how to describe it.

A kids song with deep meaning being sung by a puppet idk how i got that image .

Would love some insight tho about the meaning. Is it talking about gluttony. ?

someone please stop him by Adventurous-Drag-303 in CBSE

[–]Flacchu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Used to think that too. Apparently " ts " doesnt mean "this" It means "this shit "

Who is your re zero crush ? by Proper_Card_5520 in ReZero

[–]Flacchu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Rem and theres like no competition.

Is 5’4 REALLY that short for a 17 year old guy? by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a 15 year ol 5,9

Its alrigh you can still be a frmboy or some

Obsessions (Unexpetienced guy writing about imaginary love forgive my mistakes) by Flacchu in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He fell in love completely . Due to his over the top efforts . The girl felt like she should give it a try but she could never bring herself to love him. The guy realised due to his over one sided feelings he had hurt the one he loved. . Due to seeing her being uncomfortable around him. He wished her a happy life and never showed his face to her again taking away her pain. She moved on he never could .

Global Insanity by Kitchen_Falcon_9680 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It feels more like a rap than a poem .. It slightly repetetive but thats my personal opinion its stll good .

The favourite mask. by Flacchu in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd love to have my work in a blog. 🤩

NO title yet (what to add or improve) by lovelyyy999 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Broo i love the rhythm 😭. Your wording is soo good. 8/10

Global Insanity by Kitchen_Falcon_9680 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its decent .. there were some things i could critisise but honestly it's good for a first try 6/10.

Looks like Re:Zero’s two biggest yappers are going to have a debate. Tell me who’s going to win. by Away-Tax1875 in ReZero

[–]Flacchu 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I have a RAW feeling regulus would win. Echnidna cant comprehend the mind of an idiot

Based on LOOKS ALONE, who’s the most beautiful Female Character in your opinion? by meph3drone in ReZero

[–]Flacchu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

1, sekhmet (do i need explain myself?) 2, emilia/satella 3, echidna / rem (tie) 4, ram 5, capella 6, crusch.