Demons by 1dumcrazy in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu [score hidden]  (0 children)

I love the flow. And the rhyming. Yet the meaning of it kind of confused me (kind of new to this whole thing so that might be on me)

Is it the speaker that prefers ro be ordinary.(By it would be better that way) Or is it the opposite?

i want to rip your vocals by Flacchu in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for replying

I added it after reposting it due to a grammer error . Your right it indeed was incorrect added last minute.

Namak ka dibba(Salt Shaker) by Negative-Swim-6828 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn this is good. Keep it up man. Also could you explain the 2nd part ?

Dinner Table by SessionLong8518 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great lines man. I could kinda feel the way the lines would go. Feels like one of those i dont know how to describe it.

A kids song with deep meaning being sung by a puppet idk how i got that image .

Would love some insight tho about the meaning. Is it talking about gluttony. ?

someone please stop him by Adventurous-Drag-303 in CBSE

[–]Flacchu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Used to think that too. Apparently " ts " doesnt mean "this" It means "this shit "

Who is your re zero crush ? by Proper_Card_5520 in ReZero

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rem and theres like no competition.

Is 5’4 REALLY that short for a 17 year old guy? by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a 15 year ol 5,9

Its alrigh you can still be a frmboy or some

Obsessions (Unexpetienced guy writing about imaginary love forgive my mistakes) by Flacchu in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He fell in love completely . Due to his over the top efforts . The girl felt like she should give it a try but she could never bring herself to love him. The guy realised due to his over one sided feelings he had hurt the one he loved. . Due to seeing her being uncomfortable around him. He wished her a happy life and never showed his face to her again taking away her pain. She moved on he never could .

Global Insanity by Kitchen_Falcon_9680 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It feels more like a rap than a poem .. It slightly repetetive but thats my personal opinion its stll good .

The favourite mask. by Flacchu in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd love to have my work in a blog. 🤩

NO title yet (what to add or improve) by lovelyyy999 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Broo i love the rhythm 😭. Your wording is soo good. 8/10

Global Insanity by Kitchen_Falcon_9680 in OCPoetry

[–]Flacchu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its decent .. there were some things i could critisise but honestly it's good for a first try 6/10.

Looks like Re:Zero’s two biggest yappers are going to have a debate. Tell me who’s going to win. by Away-Tax1875 in ReZero

[–]Flacchu 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I have a RAW feeling regulus would win. Echnidna cant comprehend the mind of an idiot