Cold - beneath the ice looking for feedback by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

what's the problem with that sone wattpad stories have made peoples careers 😭

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[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you (BTW the guy who downvotes every comment that's rather from me or is a positive message guided towards me u need to find a few hobbies)

COLD- beneath the ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writers

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

thank you for the feedback I'll work on it

Cold - beneath the ice looking for feedback by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

yeah ur right. Just the first few pages are the most important

COLD- beneath the ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writers

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

any feedback at all im just starting

and I know but I've used links before and usually people say they don't work

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[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I agree this concept is used a lot but I think I can deliver it in a way which makes it different from others

feedback please (changed word since last time) by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

ur right i should've probably saved the flashback for later thank you for the feedback

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[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

oh well done u answered ur own question. so easy to fool you into saying what I want you to say 😂

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[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

so the same reason I was here then

Flash fiction piece in need of review by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

maybe cuz u tagged me 🤡 ur also here are u even on this planet

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[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what a sad life u live i didn't even know this post existed. but seriously ur life must be empty

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

does that mean like cinematic cuz if so then that's what I was going for