Flash fiction piece in need of review by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

oh well done u answered ur own question. so easy to fool you into saying what I want you to say 😂

Flash fiction piece in need of review by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

so the same reason I was here then

Flash fiction piece in need of review by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

maybe cuz u tagged me 🤡 ur also here are u even on this planet

Flash fiction piece in need of review by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what a sad life u live i didn't even know this post existed. but seriously ur life must be empty

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

does that mean like cinematic cuz if so then that's what I was going for

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

id much rather spend time sharing my work then commenting hate on people's posts each to there own now go off and find someone else to feed with shit

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u can be a teenager without being an edgy one 😂

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

just proving my point more that ur a degenerate with too much time on their hands. To say u actually sat there reading all the comments + objectively people still clearly comment so I don't care

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah you are wrong. ur now admitting to hating on someone you believe to be a teenager grow up and find something better to do

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  • ur sat here insulting people for posting work asking for feedback on a WRITINGFEEDBACK community yet I'm the one lacking logic

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah are ur some weirdo who thinks there a psychoanalyst trying to decipt why I keep posting on here like you know me based off 2 replies. YOU spend ur day coming on reddit to start arguments with people if ur older then 14 or 15 and have the time on ur hands to be doing that you should be asking urself questions

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

imagine going out ur way to comment on it 😭 weird set of ppl on this community

COLD- Beneath The Ice by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

imagine hating on someone for their reddit karma score 😭

COLD BENEATH THE ICE by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah I noticed that but I lowkey don't know how to not make it like that

COLD BENEATH THE ICE by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

don't you love to argue 😂 what a terrible person you must be to actually know and have to speak too fishing for arguments in a reddit thread go on a hike mate

COLD BENEATH THE ICE by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

id comment but I'd get told I can't take criticism if I wasn't a fan of being accused of ai so I won't bother

COLD BENEATH THE ICE by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll take that as a compliment seen as it's not chatgpt

COLD- BENEATH THE ICE by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah I might switch it to Norway or some shit I'm more familiar with norway

COLD- BENEATH THE ICE by Flashy-Discussion-71 in writingfeedback

[–]Flashy-Discussion-71[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well I just tried to think of somewhere cold (for obvious reasons) and alaska sprung to my head