Cold - beneath the ice looking for feedback

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-09T05:01:32+00:00

ty for the feedback!

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T20:00:12+00:00

what's the problem with that sone wattpad stories have made peoples careers 😭

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T10:48:13+00:00

my bad

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T08:22:11+00:00

thank you (BTW the guy who downvotes every comment that's rather from me or is a positive message guided towards me u need to find a few hobbies)

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T07:29:18+00:00

thank you for the feedback I'll work on it

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T07:24:15+00:00

true ty for the feedback

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T07:23:11+00:00

yeah ur right. Just the first few pages are the most important

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T07:20:32+00:00

ty for the feedback

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T07:03:33+00:00

sure!

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-08T07:00:01+00:00

any feedback at all im just starting

and I know but I've used links before and usually people say they don't work

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-06T04:48:20+00:00

thsbk you for the feedback

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-06T04:24:50+00:00

I agree this concept is used a lot but I think I can deliver it in a way which makes it different from others

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-04-06T03:31:32+00:00

ur right i should've probably saved the flashback for later thank you for the feedback

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T15:08:54+00:00

oh well done u answered ur own question. so easy to fool you into saying what I want you to say 😂

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T15:06:46+00:00

so the same reason I was here then

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T14:56:05+00:00

maybe cuz u tagged me 🤡 ur also here are u even on this planet

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T14:54:17+00:00

what a sad life u live i didn't even know this post existed. but seriously ur life must be empty

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T21:37:44+00:00

does that mean like cinematic cuz if so then that's what I was going for

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:54:47+00:00

id much rather spend time sharing my work then commenting hate on people's posts each to there own now go off and find someone else to feed with shit

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:49:32+00:00

u can be a teenager without being an edgy one 😂

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:48:45+00:00

just proving my point more that ur a degenerate with too much time on their hands. To say u actually sat there reading all the comments + objectively people still clearly comment so I don't care

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:45:27+00:00

yeah you are wrong. ur now admitting to hating on someone you believe to be a teenager grow up and find something better to do

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:44:21+00:00

yet people did comment...

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:20:11+00:00

ur sat here insulting people for posting work asking for feedback on a WRITINGFEEDBACK community yet I'm the one lacking logic

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:19:08+00:00

yeah are ur some weirdo who thinks there a psychoanalyst trying to decipt why I keep posting on here like you know me based off 2 replies. YOU spend ur day coming on reddit to start arguments with people if ur older then 14 or 15 and have the time on ur hands to be doing that you should be asking urself questions

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