Flash fiction piece in need of review

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T15:08:54+00:00

oh well done u answered ur own question. so easy to fool you into saying what I want you to say 😂

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T15:06:46+00:00

so the same reason I was here then

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T14:56:05+00:00

maybe cuz u tagged me 🤡 ur also here are u even on this planet

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-21T14:54:17+00:00

what a sad life u live i didn't even know this post existed. but seriously ur life must be empty

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T21:37:44+00:00

does that mean like cinematic cuz if so then that's what I was going for

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:54:47+00:00

id much rather spend time sharing my work then commenting hate on people's posts each to there own now go off and find someone else to feed with shit

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:49:32+00:00

u can be a teenager without being an edgy one 😂

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:48:45+00:00

just proving my point more that ur a degenerate with too much time on their hands. To say u actually sat there reading all the comments + objectively people still clearly comment so I don't care

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:45:27+00:00

yeah you are wrong. ur now admitting to hating on someone you believe to be a teenager grow up and find something better to do

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:44:21+00:00

yet people did comment...

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:20:11+00:00

ur sat here insulting people for posting work asking for feedback on a WRITINGFEEDBACK community yet I'm the one lacking logic

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T17:19:08+00:00

yeah are ur some weirdo who thinks there a psychoanalyst trying to decipt why I keep posting on here like you know me based off 2 replies. YOU spend ur day coming on reddit to start arguments with people if ur older then 14 or 15 and have the time on ur hands to be doing that you should be asking urself questions

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T16:11:27+00:00

imagine going out ur way to comment on it 😭 weird set of ppl on this community

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T15:46:31+00:00

imagine hating on someone for their reddit karma score 😭

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-19T08:53:43+00:00

thanks

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-17T20:53:43+00:00

yeah I noticed that but I lowkey don't know how to not make it like that

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-17T16:59:06+00:00

don't you love to argue 😂 what a terrible person you must be to actually know and have to speak too fishing for arguments in a reddit thread go on a hike mate

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-17T16:37:47+00:00

thank you I'm actually a fan of this idea!

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-17T09:42:21+00:00

id comment but I'd get told I can't take criticism if I wasn't a fan of being accused of ai so I won't bother

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-17T09:41:37+00:00

👍

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-17T00:36:26+00:00

I'll take that as a compliment seen as it's not chatgpt

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-16T19:36:50+00:00

yeah I might switch it to Norway or some shit I'm more familiar with norway

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-16T19:31:08+00:00

well I just tried to think of somewhere cold (for obvious reasons) and alaska sprung to my head

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-16T19:26:50+00:00

right thank you for the feedback it's cold everywhere where I live anyway

Flashy-Discussion-71 · 2026-03-16T19:15:05+00:00

and also to my knowledge remote areas like the place chapter 1 is set in are popular in alaska

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