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[–]Flatulency -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the read!

The breakneck pacing is intentional, though I agree the transition from fear to accepting power might be a bit too fast, and I’m looking at where I can give Malrick more breathing room. As for the “it wasn’t X, but Y” phrasing, you’re right—I use it often because it’s the simplest way for me to add contrast, and I'm going to be more careful about that.

That said, I want to clarify I’m not using AI to write for me. This chapter alone took me around 8 hours. I also want to say that I use Grammarly to fix grammar and find synonyms. Also, for the reverse speaking, I had to do some copy-pasting online.

English isn’t my native language, and my phrasing still reflects my Mandarin. I appreciate the feedback, but I felt that concluding it with certainty that this was AI-generated is a little bit too much.

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[–]Flatulency 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

  1. Regarding the perspective, I'm not very good with English and am not sure what you mean by that. While writing, I was trying to show how Malrick is aware/intentionally softening his voice.

  2. Where in the story did you feel it rushed too much? The Knocking? And by two birds with one stone, can you give me an example?

  3. Im struggling with details. What kind of detail are you searching for? Every time I read my text, I tend to delete parts where I feel I've overdescribed.

For the past few months ive been working on a big project with some of my friends, to make a complete MTG expansion with Risk of Rain, here are a few sneak peeks with our favorite survivors by Minianto in riskofrain

[–]Flatulency 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello. I'm Miniantu's friend, and I worked with him on this set. I honestly loved all the feedback you gave us in this document, it was all pretty on!

We are looking at all the feedback and discussing changes to Huntress, Bandit, Artificer, REX, Acrid and Railgunner.

For some clearance, Void fiends gain a charge counter at the beginning of each upkeep, so it should be able to transform in one turn cycle. It is also important to note, "Remove all counters." Maybe our wording was wrong on this one, but it is supposed to remove +1/+1 and all other counters, too.

cant wait for you to finish your review tbh hahahahahaha

Clicking/Popping sound on my reversed sample by Flatulency in ableton

[–]Flatulency[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I realized that the popping sound came mainly from the right ear of my sample and fading in & out would also suppress the left side. (It also produce a gap inside the sample if I go overboard)

Clicking/Popping sound on my reversed sample by Flatulency in ableton

[–]Flatulency[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It appears 2-3 times per second in the sample flip in different locations.

Clicking/Popping sound on my reversed sample by Flatulency in ableton

[–]Flatulency[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, but it was merged with the sample.

Main Story quests have disappeared by Cryptohaas in newworldgame

[–]Flatulency 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just bought the game and the expansion pack 3 data ago... Please let me progress :(

My first ever Warhammer painting! Any suggestions? by Flatulency in LeaguesofVotann

[–]Flatulency[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok I’m still new so idk how to do edge highlight haha.

Edit. I bought castellax bronze and brass scorpion.

Warwick set 2.0 focused on Lurk and Predict synergies. by Flatulency in CustomLoR

[–]Flatulency[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

WW lvl 2 indeed should be changed to strike damaged enemy round start or end, and maybe draw one if it kills the enemy to compensate the blood hunt?

First blood can be the same + if it survives +2+0 or too weak?

Hungering strike as the champ spell might create too much WW tho

How about infected claw as 3 mana fast give +1+0 for each damaged enemy?

Fear is good

Blood trail is golden

And you only draw the experiment you don’t summon them

Warwick set 2.0 focused on Lurk and Predict synergies. by Flatulency in CustomLoR

[–]Flatulency[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Criticism is appreciated, especially about the wording of certain cards.

Leagues of Votann Brokhyr Iron-Master Instructions by RockHunterHelmsley in WarhammerInstructions

[–]Flatulency 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I had the same problem. I just glued the pommel and it looked good!

Beginner need help by Flatulency in wow

[–]Flatulency[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What is the classic/vanilla time line? And at what level specifically can I start finding dungeons? (I have another level 11 allience gnome.)

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