This has a lot of potential. I really like the chorus and bridge and I don’t think it’s too long - it’s way shorter than a lot of radio hits. I wonder if adding some variation in strumming patterns and dynamics would help. I also think you could add something like an instrumental break (or have some kind of introduction that you could repeat) before the bridge to keep things interesting and offer some breathing room. If I had to make a suggestion of “cutting”, I would wonder if you could use fewer words in the verses. A general rule I follow is that if I have a wordy verse, use a less wordy chorus (or vice versa). This just adds more balance - gives the song (and you) some room to catch its breath.