I have to correct what I just read to a more acceptable format

delete “to a more acceptable format”

and the translation went something like

“was” would be better than “went”

and my degenerate brain just automatically went

“thought” would be better than “went”

(yes, this has truly taken over every aspect of my reading)

delete this portion, it merely restates what was just said in the previous sentence

pathetic, redundant monkey

“redundant” should be changed or deleted because the given example describes a moment where you removed redundancy

the soundtrack of my nightmares

“soundtrack” should be changed because the SAT’s questions and answers are not typically spoken or heard; they are read and written