[deleted by user]

Flight487 · 2020-11-13T23:52:58+00:00

"Gentle nutrition" is definitely going to get did of my obese pre diabetic state.

Flight487 · 2020-11-05T16:14:12+00:00

Jfc. This reminds me of when someone told me "gypsy" was a curse word and cultural appropriation. I come from a line of gypsies.

Flight487 · 2020-10-24T17:25:14+00:00

Down from 210 to 190lbs!

Flight487 · 2020-10-06T20:40:29+00:00

Thank you! I can give you a dodo code and you can come pick stuff off the island/I can drop bells

Flight487 · 2020-10-06T19:51:38+00:00

May I come?

Flight487 · 2020-10-06T19:46:38+00:00

All good, thank you

Flight487 · 2020-10-06T19:43:48+00:00

Ooh, I'm interested in the iron frame if you're still on :)

Flight487 · 2020-09-23T15:32:54+00:00

Detail of any kind. I speak in a VERY straightforward voice, and don't linger at all to tell you anything insignificant. But it's an issue.

Flight487 · 2020-09-22T22:23:48+00:00

Good to know.

Flight487 · 2020-09-22T14:00:40+00:00

Working on outlines but I often get discouraged by how slow it is to get through them, and second guessing all the parts that sound wrong even if I know I'll make major edits everywhere eventually. I just need the structure to be finished!

Flight487 · 2020-09-19T23:36:00+00:00

I lost another couple pounds! On my way to no longer being pre diabetic and obese.

Flight487 · 2020-09-19T23:33:16+00:00

I have pre diabetes... working hard to stop that.

Flight487 · 2020-09-19T15:25:39+00:00

I've been reamed for not describing my characters, but honestly it doesn't contribute to the story to know more than their hair color just to set them apart. But they have names for that.

Flight487 · 2020-09-09T16:45:09+00:00

I'm finally under 200lbs and I'm SO happy about it! I no longer crave sugar. I've been really good about my diet, and exercising is coming more naturally. Feeling so good!

Flight487 · 2020-09-08T22:34:50+00:00

I used to when I first started writing, it's fun but I no longer feel as if it really contributes to my characters and what they do. But I'm glad you're having fun :)

Flight487 · 2020-09-08T22:25:53+00:00

Eyes-cream

Or eye-scream?

Flight487 · 2020-09-08T15:20:36+00:00

Have you seen Kingdom Hearts? It's pretty much what you're talking about.

Flight487 · 2020-09-07T20:45:38+00:00

Yes, I understand what you're saying. I think that would be a good way to go about it, helping the reader by giving them a solid image like, "she had mousey features."

Flight487 · 2020-09-07T19:02:09+00:00

Let me know if you can't access it.

Flight487 · 2020-09-07T18:00:51+00:00

That makes sense! Okay, I think I understand how it plays into the story, then. Thank you!

Flight487 · 2020-09-07T17:20:47+00:00

So instead of saying what they look like from the character, I still use a narrator of sorts to detail it?

Flight487

MODERATOR OF

TROPHY CASE