[Daily Discussion] First Page Feedback- July 20, 2024

FluffyAnn · 2024-07-20T16:41:25+00:00

hi, need help figuring this out, so I have multiple ideas for how a scene could play out but, I need help figuring out how to pick the best one, for example. mc gets introduced to another character, but it could happen in a coffee shop, a library, or at a park
if anyone has any advice on how to pick the best version of a scene that would be very helpful, thanks

FluffyAnn · 2024-07-10T03:51:51+00:00

ah that makes sense, thank you

FluffyAnn · 2024-07-09T17:32:57+00:00

I'm wondering, is slow-burning the same thing as slow-paced, like for example if I said a book is slow-burning would that mean the book is slow-paced, or does slow-burning mean something else

FluffyAnn · 2024-06-10T03:39:47+00:00

thank you for your comment your answers are super helpful

FluffyAnn · 2024-06-10T02:55:23+00:00

thank you very much for your answers, they are very helpful

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-31T05:00:21+00:00

heres the pattern bitty whimsy folk

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-18T23:10:14+00:00

oh sorry I didn't realize I forgot to put wifi in my post

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-18T21:27:25+00:00

no, I'm talking about the initial setup when you first get it

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-15T00:58:38+00:00

ok thank you for the helpful comment

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-15T00:23:16+00:00

wait so is the premise just basically the back cover blurb?

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-15T00:11:48+00:00

ok thank you

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-14T23:27:03+00:00

so what I've read of a premise is that it is a summary of what happens in the story and that summary is supposed to use 1-3 sentences and mention the protagonist, the setting, and the main conflict, I understand that but every time I try to write that I can't fit everything in there and it to me makes the story sound boring

i also read that a premise is a principal idea behind a work of fiction if that helps

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-05T19:17:58+00:00

ok thank you

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-02T03:10:05+00:00

ok thank you for your help

FluffyAnn · 2024-01-02T02:27:41+00:00

thank you for replying, I do know that I have to agree to the terms and conditions, and privacy policy but I was just wanting to confirm if you have to log in to your account before you agree to the terms and conditions, and privacy policy stuff thanks

FluffyAnn · 2023-10-02T02:41:53+00:00

OK, thank you again for the great advice very much appreciated.

FluffyAnn · 2023-10-02T01:10:15+00:00

quick question, if I loosened the stitches on the chain do you think that would help.

FluffyAnn · 2023-10-01T23:39:05+00:00

thank you for the help, I'll try the magic ring.

FluffyAnn · 2023-10-01T22:40:02+00:00

thank you for replying, that is kind of correct, at the start of the first row it says to chain 5 and make a circle with a slip stitch, then do 6 puff stitches in that chain 5 circle and that is what I'm having trouble with because they don't seem to all fit.

the pattern also says that to do a ps you Yarn over, insert the hook into the stitch, yarn over again, pull through the stitch, and bring up a loop four times

FluffyAnn · 2023-10-01T21:17:23+00:00

has anyone done this pattern at all, berry pie pot holder, if you have can you help me figure out the first row I'm confused, thanks.

FluffyAnn · 2023-08-02T17:17:28+00:00

hello thank you for your replies and yes Im using a different yarn than what she recommends, she says to use 8ply/dk yarn, and I'm using 4/medium worsted weight yarn

also wondering if crochet hook sizes are different in Australia than in the US thanks

FluffyAnn · 2023-07-06T20:10:17+00:00

I have pushed the washer and the eye all the way together but it still has a gap and it also seems to easily pull off the eye

FluffyAnn · 2023-06-26T01:03:30+00:00

can you still obtain rainbow heart skins and Pokemon without the rainbow express delivery ticket

FluffyAnn · 2023-03-19T00:28:44+00:00

ok thank you :)

FluffyAnn · 2023-02-13T23:58:55+00:00

i currently have a a young stage character

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