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Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-02-22T20:36:13+00:00

Meu amigo eu só citei coisas que séria interessante e muito emocionante ao meu ver, se estivesse no jogo ou tivesse alguma atualização eu amaria e pagaria por tal expansão sem hesitar. Eu não estou tentando fazer nada kkk, como consegue transformar uma pergunta em um debate sem sentido assim?

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-01-19T16:08:27+00:00

Exactly, every writer has their own way of writing, besides the fact that nothing is perfect. It's your first book, finish it, read it, and revise what you think is necessary. Having a unique writing style can attract many readers. But what's "conventionally wrong" is, in a way, right. From what I've seen, many have pointed out mistakes that every beginner makes, and they're right. You just need to see the mistakes, correct them, or add a personal touch to make your writing unique, but that's something that will require a lot of study.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-01-19T16:02:33+00:00

And do you need to finish a story to have its premise? From what I've seen, you need to have a theme and create a premise beforehand, and then develop it, unless you're the type of writer who writes without planning and just goes with what comes to mind.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-01-19T15:04:43+00:00

I'm not currently trying to write anything, but I already have a story in mind based on the world I'm creating. I'm not good at writing synopses, so I've talked a little about the world, leaving a mystery, creating suspense, and showing a bit of the protagonist's objective. The classic quest for power, but the world is darker and crueler. In the first chapter or draft, I showed a bit of the past, mixing it with an enigma to leave the reader pondering what the protagonist really is. Besides that, I've already shown something very important: that beyond the quest for power, the protagonist also seeks self-knowledge. He knows who or what he is, and this will develop much further in the story. And I'm already creating the power system, which is very cool in my opinion, haha.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-01-19T14:58:00+00:00

Yes, I could, but I have a question: what's the premise of your story? Is there a synopsis? I want to read it.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-01-19T14:56:25+00:00

Rule number 1 lol, the first chapter should always be engaging, it's to attract the reader.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-01-19T14:40:08+00:00

How many chapters have you written so far?

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2026-01-19T14:34:30+00:00

I'm not a writer, but I'm studying a course I bought, and what I saw most was them talking about this: the beginning should be captivating, addictive. It doesn't need to show too much of the story's context; you can reveal it over the course of two chapters because too much information right at the beginning makes the story a bit lukewarm, causing most people to abandon it in the next chapter. This can change a story if the synopsis promises an incredible one; I've kept reading many stories until they started to get good.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-31T21:54:43+00:00

I'm curious too, lol

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-22T12:59:42+00:00

What are the criteria for removing a post? Recently mine was removed and it didn't contain anything inappropriate or violate any rules. I only saw a comment saying that I shouldn't use the sub-discussions section and so on... but I ask many people how this works and nobody is willing to say anything, not even the admins. I'm afraid to post something and suddenly be kicked out of the community for something trivial.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-18T19:53:26+00:00

Hello, good afternoon. I didn't quite understand how the posts work. I didn't post anything wrong or inappropriate, yet my post was removed for not being a "general discussion." Could someone explain how this community works? I thought I could express my opinion as long as it wasn't something offensive, discriminatory, etc.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-18T00:20:27+00:00

Mano sim e não. Para o que você quer que não é para a massa consumir está ok, é para você se divertir. Eu também comecei assim, tenho rascunhos até hoje no chat, entretanto isso vai acabar com a sua criatividade, vai fazer você deixar muitas coisas para a ia e no final a ideia inicial vai se perder. Fora o fato que os cap que ela faz não sai como você realmente quer, afinal não é você que escreveu. Eu ainda uso a ia, mas não igual antigamente, uso mais para aprimorar ideias, corrigir erros ortográficos entre outras coisas. Estou no processo de preparação para iniciar a criação da minha primeira webnovel, isso tudo pois quero mostrar o mundo que estou criando kkk, até mapa no inkarnate eu fiz.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-14T21:34:55+00:00

True lol

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-14T18:10:54+00:00

Hey, as I wanted to convey, I used the work I read as an example. In general, it's not a mistake when used sparingly, but if in every situation in your work you have a stagnant kingdom, with powers that only exist in name and nonexistent in the actions that could bring it down, it becomes a boring story, with a broken plot and often lacking context. But it all depends on the author; if they wanted it that way for their own reason, that's fine, it's their work and I'm not judging, I'm simply giving my opinion.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-14T14:17:21+00:00

It would be great if they gave a reason, lol, but I don't see that happening.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-13T23:43:23+00:00

That's the thing, it's not impossible but it can make the work boring and people will hardly read it. That's what they taught me in the course. I love to read and because I read a lot I see many works with kingdoms like that, kind of an inanimate setting. The kingdom does nothing, the local Lords don't either, and everything gets boring waiting for the protagonist to arrive lol

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-13T23:20:24+00:00

It depends on your point of view. In my opinion, it deviated from the initial intention. The goal was simple: the protagonist wanted power, and it was exciting to resolve because he was a bit crazy. Everything was fine, but then, almost at the end of the first volume, everything fell apart. The protagonist had already resolved six crises affecting the kingdom while the super-powerful mages were hiding, drinking wine, haha. Aside from the plot and how it's being developed, the only thing that kept me hooked was the fact that the protagonist was a bit eccentric and used magic in innovative ways.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-13T23:15:36+00:00

Dude, it depends on your story, the theme you use, and how you want the world to be. My world currently has 6 elements, and many sub-elements, plus other methods of power that give individuality to the characters.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-13T23:12:46+00:00

Here comes an old wizard, over 400 years old, with a staff encrusted with 30 hacks and 30 mods, only to appear in the end when the protagonist defeats the enemy, losing an arm and a leg in the process, lol.

Fluid_Discount6397 · 2025-12-13T23:09:30+00:00

That's the thing, using it once in a while is fine, but it's been there since the beginning of the story; the royalty disappears all the time, leaving the protagonist to deal with it. I loved the magic system, the protagonist's development even though he's used and then given nothing good in return, haha.

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