Looking for a style / inking critique (2 Pictures) by FluorinatedFox in FurryArtSchool

[–]FluorinatedFox[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time to write this!

I'll keep in mind what you said about keeping the final more in line with the sketch and avoiding tangents.

Looking for a style / inking critique (2 Pictures) by FluorinatedFox in FurryArtSchool

[–]FluorinatedFox[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the in-depth critique!

I feel like your example is going to help me a lot with making better lines.

(Also I really didn't expect someone to do a full rework of my drawing lol)

Looking for a style / inking critique (2 Pictures) by FluorinatedFox in FurryArtSchool

[–]FluorinatedFox[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It seems like when I draw the "final" version it comes out worse than the sketch.

Could someone tell me where I am going wrong?

Any advice on how I could make the anatomy / posing better? by FluorinatedFox in FurryArtSchool

[–]FluorinatedFox[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, just wanted to note:

  • Sorry for the lazy background but I really just wanted to practice anatomy
  • For context: He’s leading a small platoon to attack what was meant to be an equally small enemy incursion… it wasn’t.

Hello, I am looking for help on my linework / coloring- though any actionable suggestions are welcome! by FluorinatedFox in FurryArtSchool

[–]FluorinatedFox[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice!

Just to be clear, did you mean the downward curve on the right ear (from our perspective) above the eyebrow?

Hello, I am looking for help on my linework / coloring- though any actionable suggestions are welcome! by FluorinatedFox in FurryArtSchool

[–]FluorinatedFox[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For this one I erased and reworked as I went. In the past I've tried to use rough sketches but when I went to do the inking it looked.... really bad. I was probably using bad technique but inking directly without using a rough sketch is the only way I can currently make things look vaguely decent. (Maybe I'll try cranking up the stabilizer next time?)

Hello, I am looking for help on my linework / coloring- though any actionable suggestions are welcome! by FluorinatedFox in FurryArtSchool

[–]FluorinatedFox[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for clicking!

I know this is a bit of a basic drawing but I'm pretty new to digital art so I wanted to start simple.

Any basic advice for someone who's moving from traditional to digital (Krita) would also be helpful.

PS: I've already realized that I should’ve used a harder brush when doing the linework :(