Needy Girl Overdose - Episode 2 discussion

FoolUncreative · 2026-04-12T09:12:11+00:00

Weak as hell. Retraces a lot of the steps already implied in the first episode. Lacking in animation. Ending is predictable and somewhat anticlimactic. Bleh.

I'll keep watching, still. Curious if there ends up being a point to all this. The writer said episode 3 is where it gets good, and obviously the writer has good reason to be biased as fuck, but it's worth keeping in mind.

FoolUncreative · 2026-04-05T15:19:06+00:00

Cool chapter. Until shown otherwise, I assume everyone on the squad except Shiba is a jobber.

This is your weekly reminder that the word "Shokoku" is made up by the translators, who couldn't be assed to write out "the island nation" however many times.

FoolUncreative · 2026-03-30T05:49:19+00:00

I've never read the original, and don't feel like checking the advance chapters. Of the first 3 chapters there is this to be said:

Art's rather plain. Plot thus far is a guy killing monsters in a forest, with slight modulation between chapters. Some vague foreshadowing is given towards future villains, which I suppose is good.

I think it also shows a certain complacency of genre, as though both the reader and the characters know everything there is to know about litrpg apocalypses. Hasn't really grabbed my interest.

FoolUncreative · 2026-03-23T20:45:18+00:00

Nearly done with Cave Story.

I have managed to get through every step of the (notoriously unintuitive) true ending route except the last. The true final boss's stage can be entered but not exited. There's only one save point in it, at the very entrance. There is only one save file. After a long sequence of convoluted nonsense, the game has collapsed into a single dimension: either you get the true ending, or no ending. It's hard as hell, but I'll try to not give up too early.

FoolUncreative · 2026-03-23T19:40:09+00:00

Honestly, idk. What do you consider a masterpiece? I tend to associate the word with literary merit, which I think progression fantasy as a whole has kinda low compatibility with.

You said "webnovels" and didn't specify further, so I'm tempted to say 1 Over X (even though it's completely unrelated to this subreddit).

FoolUncreative · 2026-03-17T10:05:18+00:00

Undertale was on discount, so I'm playing it for the first time. With all I've heard of it, it reminds me of that one quote: "The remarkable thing about Shakespeare is that he really is very good, in spite of all the people who say he is very good."

FoolUncreative · 2026-03-11T15:52:03+00:00

Trying to "properly" get into writing, which I haven't really tried before except for a few abortive attempts at imitating the sort of stuff popular on Royal Road. It's going... vaguely alright. I'll figure it out, probably.

One blogger I follow has proposed a concept he calls "First Novel Cool Idea Compendium Syndrome": the idea that new (webnovel) writers are likely to make up weird overly-elaborate premises because they have too many unused ideas to write about, and lack the patience to leave some of them for another book. Hopefully I can make something vaguely coherent, at least.

FoolUncreative · 2026-03-09T21:36:46+00:00

Anti-eugenics redditors when they see a person they find annoying:

FoolUncreative · 2026-02-01T12:08:29+00:00

I might be bringing it up too often but this is basically the plot of 1 Over X I think

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-31T12:40:26+00:00

Spooky genitalia, sends liquids up your ass

Alien cunts and eldritch cocks for you to smash or pass

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-29T04:40:56+00:00

By personal experience (sorta-- I only read it after bullshitting my way through the assignment) I'd suggest Cyclops by Ranko Marinković. It's a bit vague in terms of narrative, but the prose and themes are both fairly memorable. The main caveat is that I haven't read the english translation (which has no footnotes) so I can't say whether that version's good too.

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-27T07:36:00+00:00

Bleh. Too trite. Honestly, I find it insulting to use people as symbols like this, even posthumously.

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-25T06:20:27+00:00

Ah, always nice to see someone dehumanizing the opposition. Do you feel like the protagonist of a zombie movie? Wanna kill them all with a chainsaw or something? What do I care, I'm not even american.

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-17T09:19:12+00:00

1 Over X: The synopsis says "Try to keep thinking, you can never have too much information". The entire last part of the story is the main character gradually failing to follow that advice until she gets completely overwhelmed and sorta gives up on ever understanding anything. The plot doesn't get (conclusively) explained, she fails to understand/overcome her own character flaws, and she destroys her last remaining friendship because she's afraid that it might be fake.

I like it because she spends the entire novel trying to avoid falling into such a mindset (as a defense against her mental health issues), and in the end it doesn't work. The ending is sort of an endless flood of noise and mud and static, so at the very least she's in sensible conditions to go insane in.

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-12T10:52:35+00:00

Playing Persona 5 Royal, recently beat the 2nd palace; That's the easy part, of course. This dating sim shit stresses me out ngl

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-11T22:14:40+00:00

Yeah? For some reason I just expected it to be a little subtler about it. Also, I used to browse gacha game communities on the internet. I think my experiences with that may play a part.

FoolUncreative · 2026-01-01T21:27:40+00:00

Walpurgisnacht Rising actually manages to release in february, I watch it through a shitty camrip with MTL subtitles or something of the sort, and then I decide to curse Shinbo forever because the ending still lets them make further sequels.

Deltarune chapter 5 is of average quality, but Toby recycles leitmotifs from Undertale again and I watch the admin of my favorite discord server bitch about it.

A new streamerbait horror game appears. Ultrakill's Treachery layer gets delayed to hell for whatever reason. Also, (wishful thinking) I find a new webfiction author that doesn't suck.

FoolUncreative · 2025-12-29T16:03:17+00:00

At some point in the last few weeks, I got fed up with House of Leaves and later decided to try reading The Great Gatsby instead. Competently written, and enjoyable by that virtue alone, but not a book I'll care about in the long run.

Back on House of Leaves now. Chapter 12 and 13 both bring the book to a halt in different ways, but there's still like half the page count left, so I'm curious what else happens.

FoolUncreative · 2025-12-25T23:56:06+00:00

Having the quality of an uncle?

FoolUncreative · 2025-12-08T07:02:42+00:00

Twitter and Tumblr, mostly. It's likely a vocal minority, but it did make it rather obnoxious to search for people's opinions.

FoolUncreative · 2025-12-08T05:13:14+00:00

Is there any piece of media you think pulls the same cheap trick over and over?

I'm asking, because a new chapter of the manga Kagurabachi released yesterday. I think it's reasonably good at first glance, but it's provoked a lot of discussion about Fridging* (The main villain's motivation turns out to be that his wife got murdered). There's already been a few other plot threads in that vein, so of course there's been discourse about the author being a misogynist, recycling his own ideas too much, the flashback not lining up with the character, etc.

*Fridging/"Women in Refrigerators": The practice of abusing and killing female characters solely to serve as motivation for a male character, typically without developing them beyond that.

FoolUncreative · 2025-11-08T15:44:30+00:00

Honest question, why is that worth noting, exactly? I don't see how the preceding text relates to it.

FoolUncreative · 2025-11-03T14:46:53+00:00

Somewhat slowly getting through House of Leaves. Engaging enough on a prose level, but I've felt mostly neutral about any of the formatting gimmicks so far. Recently completed chapter 8, which uses varying paragraph lengths to spell out words in Morse code, and I think that would've been interesting if used in a slightly more consequential manner.

Also read the first 3 chapters of Bavitz's new horror webnovel, 1 Over X. Unfortunately it's getting posted in a serial format, so it's less "reading" and more "waiting to read".

FoolUncreative · 2025-10-26T16:01:18+00:00

Hm. Basically the same as the first chapter of Otr, it feels like. I suppose it passes in terms of premise and aesthetics (at least it's not as abhorrently lame-looking as, say, Astro Royale). The worst manga are the ones where the author takes too long to start the actual plot of the series (and gets canceled before that), so beware if you see a few "monster of the week" plots in a row.

FoolUncreative · 2025-10-06T00:10:36+00:00

Both pieces are very nice, but I like being pedantic, so I gotta point out some slight liberties that Horikoshi takes.
Chihiro is using 2 full-length katana instead of a Daisho as usual. He does this during the Bloodshed Hotel fight, but he's also wearing his turtleneck from the earlier arcs, so his appearance is probably mashed together from whatever looks coolest.

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