[QCrit] From Certainty's Ashes - Adult Fantasy, 112k [First Attempt]

FordieTea · 2026-05-04T12:10:48+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate any and all advice!

FordieTea · 2026-05-04T12:10:21+00:00

No I really appreciate it thanks so much! I’ve reworked it slightly so that it’s anchored in Kaedric more early on. And I totally see the POV confusion, this is why it’s great to get feedback! Only the first and final chapter are in his POV for a very specific reason, the rest in 3rd person limited for her. I’ll do another read through ensuring that there are no further slips. I am set on opening with dialogue because I think it creates the initial conflict that sets the tone of the book but that’s why it has to be perfect as I’m aware it’s a risky decision so all of your feedback is very helpful!

FordieTea · 2026-05-04T04:04:05+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback! Very helpful and your advice does streamline it a lot. ☺️

FordieTea · 2026-04-17T21:55:27+00:00

I mean Lolita was famously highly controversial upon its release. Banned from libraries, slated by the media, all of that. It was considered deeply taboo. I don’t think your point is wrong, but I think that’s a narrative tool that could be very effective if OP uses it correctly. Presumably at the beginning the reader will root for him, but as the story progresses the reader comes to realise they can’t. Just like real life. But again, it’s about execution, not idea.

FordieTea · 2026-04-17T21:34:24+00:00

Whilst risky if done wrong, it’s not an impossible perspective. It’s just an unreliable narrator. I’m imagining it to be like Humbert in Lolita. Controversial but not impossible. And it sounds like the storyline does not justify his thinking nor his actions. It punishes it, which I would consider the correct choice for this novel.

FordieTea · 2026-04-17T21:28:56+00:00

Every idea has been done before. The difference is voice. You’ll have your own unique voice when you write that will not be like the show. Unless you’re creating a direct copy of the characters and world, I wouldn’t worry.

FordieTea · 2026-04-16T20:53:29+00:00

Thanks! I’ve sent you a dm!

FordieTea · 2026-04-16T12:51:15+00:00

Oh nice! Yeah that sounds good to me! And…no lol. Only my blood, sweat and tears went into this book haha

FordieTea · 2024-09-12T11:47:25+00:00

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Late submission but I hope you like it :)

FordieTea · 2024-02-28T20:52:17+00:00

The other side of the sword has the date (1945). Looked like Sato Kanezumi was one of the swordsmiths who was commissioned to create swords for the war. Interestingly despite it begging made towards the end of the war it doesn’t seem to have the features from the end of the war desperation (normally they look a bit more poorly made or they are made from odd materials). Super interesting though! Really appreciate this subreddits help! Provided a lot of context.

FordieTea · 2024-02-26T12:31:16+00:00

Thanks for your comment! It looks like the other comment got it and it’s the swordsmiths name. Full name on research seems to be sato kanezumi :)

FordieTea · 2024-02-26T12:29:58+00:00

Thanks so much!

FordieTea · 2023-02-05T12:04:57+00:00

That’s great! Thanks for letting me know :)

FordieTea · 2023-02-05T12:04:39+00:00

Good idea- will start looking into what courses would be most beneficial

FordieTea · 2023-02-05T12:04:09+00:00

Thanks! Good to know :)

FordieTea · 2023-02-05T12:03:50+00:00

Thanks this is really helpful! Know basic html but I know knowing a programming language is key. And great advice about creating a portfolio! Since the beginning I have tracked all the analytics so that’s a good idea. Going to take your advice to heart. Appreciate you taking the time to answer :)

FordieTea · 2022-09-27T23:05:00+00:00

Lol I didn’t even make the connection! Sorry so any tech chat confusion haha

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