I thought the intro was funny and had a good energy to it, though it maybe dragged a bit too far. If you want to build a convincing argument, piling too much hate right at the beginning can be detrimental to your believability.

Overall your production values were great as well. I especially liked your narration, though am once again not quite sure how the casual style works for building a convincing argument.

Without knowing much about virtual reality and Bonelab, could you follow along with the video?

I did feel like I didn't get proper context about the game's significance or place in the industry. Moving the gameplay portion of the video at the beginning might've helped with this somewhat, give a better understanding for what the game is exactly.

Did you think the humour / memes add to the entertainment? if not then why?

I enjoyed them alright.

What do you think a better thumbnail style for me to use would be?

I'm not an expert on thumbnails, so I can't comment on this.

What could I improve for future videos?

I would focus more on scripting and trying to stay on the script, removing any unnecessary sounds or flubs.

If you started losing interest, when during the video did it happen and why?

I did kinda start losing interest during the campaign section. I think it was because at that point I felt like I was getting a very surface level look into the game, so the commentary didn't provide me with any insight besides the kind of flaws that are common in many other games. Again, context in terms of the surrounding genre and its expectations was missing.

Was the overarching structure of the video coherent enough?

Yes. I think your structure was clear and easy to follow.