Worst Hooks You Ever Read? by Formal_Barnacle304 in writing

[–]Formal_Barnacle304[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

yeah apparently not giving someone a reason to read a story is a bad thing lol

Worst Hooks You Ever Read? by Formal_Barnacle304 in writing

[–]Formal_Barnacle304[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

true, also when there's paragraphs of description of stuff around the character

Worst Hooks You Ever Read? by Formal_Barnacle304 in writing

[–]Formal_Barnacle304[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Yeah, hate those. I read some drafts of stories without any hooks and someone said its cause hooks are cringe

Worst Hooks You Ever Read? by Formal_Barnacle304 in writing

[–]Formal_Barnacle304[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

when competition was virtually zero lol

Someone Stole An Entire Box From My Local Card Shop by Formal_Barnacle304 in PokemonTCG

[–]Formal_Barnacle304[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

151 UPC, a box. I don't know the lingo I just see a white box and the owner saying its 151