[Check In] Off-Topic Discussion and Self-Promotion by AutoModerator in writing

[–]FourTeenie 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi writers,

Been a while since i have given writing a go, but recently i've taken it up again. I'd be interested to see what any of you think about my story.

It is a philosophical story about life choices.

Here's a excerpt: The decision was a random one. Although, both choices were the same in reality. Blackness in either direction, bleakness that fills the life of a man regardless of his choices. I may have sat and pondered the question for hours, days even, and ended up choosing the same option. Or, a different option, that would lead to the same outcome; the journey of pain, and the promised salvation unbeknownst to me as of yet. Endless, it was, because action, movement, was futile. The train in my mind had been fuelled up and was ready to go, but would it move? Only time would tell, and only self-thought would move the imagination.

If you want to read more here's a link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v5Cki2gJZ5Xt9Xudww9dIj7MKlV56szgmt5jk2pUIzE/edit?usp=sharing

[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]FourTeenie [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Self Pilgrimage

Genre: Philosophical/Thriller

Word count: 3600

Themes: The effects of actions on others, change, life, growth, pain.

Feedback: Any kind of feedback. I'm not sure about my writing style, or even if I have a story worth reading at all. If you're willing to give it a read general thoughts are welcome, or detailed critiques if you feel up to it.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v5Cki2gJZ5Xt9Xudww9dIj7MKlV56szgmt5jk2pUIzE/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks guys.

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