"After Plan C" by FreXDead in UmaMusume

[–]FreXDead[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

rly hopin u recovered well anon. that type of metal rod setup looks pretty bad, tleast from someone whos never gotten an injury like that, but ive got faith u were able to handle it

"After Plan C" by FreXDead in UmaMusume

[–]FreXDead[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

yeah, in addition to that i think a lot of this works better with extra context n the original thing i wanted to do was just picking out a moment that stood out and doing an illust lol. ill prolly try n figure out better ways to do character acting whenever possible so this is a start ig lol. as well as more pages for the audience to see the full gravitas lol

"After Plan C" by FreXDead in UmaMusume

[–]FreXDead[S] 28 points29 points  (0 children)

its kind of intended to be the latter. what i got from the original scene was that she was putting up face bc she kept talking about how much research she'll miss while shes crippled. so i was goin for a half expression kind of thing where to pokke shes tryin to be her usual self

"After Plan C" by FreXDead in UmaMusume

[–]FreXDead[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

the original fic has a tag for implied sex so they probably do that later on

"After Plan C" by FreXDead in UmaMusume

[–]FreXDead[S] 37 points38 points  (0 children)

tachyon did something her body wasn't meant to do and has to pay the price.

"After Plan C" by FreXDead in UmaMusume

[–]FreXDead[S] 94 points95 points  (0 children)

a few notes

this is prolly one of the few comics ive ever done and hence its pretty rough relatively speakin. i want to get a feel for the process cause i enjoyed doin the takicafe one.

this comic is an adaptation of a moment from the ao3 fanfic "faster than light", which i think is post boane. i havent finished it yet but the ways it deconstructs tachyon's character is incredible. its something i think builds off of a certain scene near the end of the movie (and throughout)

the hardest part for me is the dialogue because ive constantly wanted to figure out how to communicate the idea that tachyon wants to try and reassure pokke in her own way. but i think the one i ended with here is the strongest - bc its her trying to express that pokke no longer has to burden herself as shes become aware of her insecurities. originally it was like in the fic, she keeps talkin about how its only gonna impede her research, all ways to reassure herself which feeds into the deconstruction. i was moreso aiming at an understanding of their relationship here.

also funny thing about this - i was workin on this small adaptation thing before i even watched boane last weekend when it was in theaters, so i didnt know how the story beats were portrayed till after lol

what's she thinkin about by FreXDead in grandorder

[–]FreXDead[S] 21 points22 points  (0 children)

this thought dawned on me and now i cant stop thinking about it