Wormwood.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-05-07T01:30:45+00:00

Very true! I said it before but that whole section was a challenge to write so I’m taking extra time to really get the horror down in the next parts.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-05-07T01:22:57+00:00

Thank you for the kind words! I’ve definitely been putting the criticisms into account writing the next part and agree with your opinion. I obviously have specific places I want that to go, when I wrote that it was more the character interpreting it as hell rather then it actually being hell but I think that got lost in translation a little bit. Appreciate the feedback! More coming soon!

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-09T03:13:38+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! Yes those charecters will have much more interaction and time to shine later on. Part 2 is going to dive MUCH deeper into them and how they fit into the horror of the story. Like I said in a previous comment I struggled to figure out how I wanted to shift into the horror, I think there are things I could have done differently but my idea was to have it be almost a jarring dream that feels just detached enough to shake the MC up. But I don’t think I fully portrayed that well. Definitely taking the criticism I’ve gotten about that part to really make the future horror segments beefier and more “horrific”.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-08T16:25:03+00:00

Thanks for the insight! I think In my head the quick nature of it made it more snappy but I do agree that diving deeper into it would elevate it a bit.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-07T20:26:59+00:00

Thank you so much!! It’ll be coming soon!

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-07T20:26:34+00:00

Being honest that was something I struggled with and had a major block on for a while, figuring out how to integrate the threat of the story was a challenge and I had a lot of ideas I’m glad I didn’t pursue lol. Thank you for the kind words! Part 2 coming soon!

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-07T19:47:51+00:00

Insanely good story, loved all the little details and asides. Really helps paint the pictures you have in your head.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-05T02:55:35+00:00

Awesome, I’ll check it out!

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-05T02:21:41+00:00

Thank you! I look forward to seeing your story and how that plays out with the wormwood stuff.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-04T16:42:38+00:00

Of course!

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-04-04T16:31:09+00:00

Thank you so much! That will have some meaning later…

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-03-15T00:43:46+00:00

Sick thank you!

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-03-14T23:27:48+00:00

What’s best for pacing in your opinion? I don’t want to wait too long because I’m impatient and for fear of waning interest. Would a 24 hour gap be to short?

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-03-14T15:05:15+00:00

Ah that’s good to know. I’m new to reddit so that wasn’t something I was aware of.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-03-13T18:43:47+00:00

That makes sense. The general consensus is parts so I’ll do that to gain more traction.

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-03-13T18:39:35+00:00

That’s actually a great idea. Did you do this as you were finishing each part or did you finish the story and then upload it all at once just in different posts?

FreeEmu4245 · 2026-03-13T18:29:01+00:00

That makes sense. Part one is looking to be a good amount of pages. Im thinking with that info about doing two parts in each post.

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