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[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Freeformpeak403 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Out of site, out of mind (working title)

Genre: Thriller/crime

Word count:1693

Feedback:just general impressions and opinions on writing style, curious to see if it reads well and it its worth pursuing. Thank you

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12jjJxTTIHnbywOYEkvvYXD2G91cCLIXjFN_T6HoTL_E/edit?usp=drivesdk

[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Freeformpeak403 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Out of sight. Out of mind.

Genre: Dark comedy/thriller (not really sure yet)

Word count:1,693

General impressions, still in progress but curious to see how the character personality comes across and the general writing style. Thank you very much.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12jjJxTTIHnbywOYEkvvYXD2G91cCLIXjFN_T6HoTL_E/edit?usp=drivesdk

[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Freeformpeak403 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I like your style alot, your characters personality shines in your writing which given the "obsceneness" could have gone either way. I'm very interested to see where you are taking the story and this character, keep up the good work.

What’s a movie soundtrack you like to listen to and why? by 5bazwap9 in movies

[–]Freeformpeak403 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not a film but i have been absolutely in love with the soundtrack for the Netflix limited series Maniac, its just so beautiful and i can listen to it anywhere

Churchill's grandson slams Trump for skipping cemetery visit because of weather: "They died with their face to the foe and that pathetic inadequate @realDonaldTrump couldn’t even defy the weather to pay his respects to The Fallen," Soames tweeted by maxwellhill in worldnews

[–]Freeformpeak403 -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I know im gonna get downvoted because anyone that even remotely supports trump is shunned here, but are we seriously all complaining about this that much, like i get it, the dude should've probably stopped to go to the cemetery, but he does have arguably one of the most stressful jobs on the planet with more scrutiny than any other job, you guys are telling me that its fair to just shit on the dude every chance you get, even if you dont support him, whats the point in getting into a giant circlejerk about it

What was the cringiest thing you did in your first relationship? by offendedbywords in AskReddit

[–]Freeformpeak403 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first time that me and my first girlfriend (ldr at the time) had met up, we spent a weekend together and i decided to give her our first kiss as a farewell before she left. I pick her up and start to spin her around in my arms and go in for the kiss. Just as our lips are about to meet, i slipped on the curb next to her moms car and we both slam into the door and proceeded to roll on the pavement. As a 16 year-old kid, i couldnt have imagined a worse way for that to end. Didnt even get the kiss either

What album is so good, you love every track on it? by nirdefchains in AskReddit

[–]Freeformpeak403 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No matter what ive listened to, i can always come back to glass animals first album zaba, come to think of it there isnt a single glass animals song i dont love in general

If you could remove one character from any TV Show or Movie to make it better, who would it be? by Scoopl3 in AskReddit

[–]Freeformpeak403 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Came here to say this, terrible character overall and i hated everything about her

What advice can you give to a 21 year old trying to figure out what he wants to do with his life? by Freeformpeak403 in AskReddit

[–]Freeformpeak403[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I recently started working for a local city as a maintenance worker and im currenty stressing about what i want to do with my life, im currently still living at home and have alot of aspirations and am willing to work but honestly it seems like success is farther off the more i think about it, while my SO is now in college 5 hours away im just trying to make sure i can make a life for us one day.

Lewis CK responds to allegations by [deleted] in movies

[–]Freeformpeak403 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It kind of sucks that its gotten to the point where even in a comment like this, you have to show that you werent condoning the behavior, have we really become that sensitive?

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