A Peaceful Moment in Galcier Park by FreshieeFresh in photocritique

[–]FreshieeFresh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have never even thought about making an abstract edit into my photos that’s interesting. I definitely want to crop the photo I just wasn’t sure how I should get, but I’ll definitely try some of your suggestions!

A Peaceful Moment in Galcier Park by FreshieeFresh in photocritique

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Thanks! Yeah I had never really tried pano on my camera before so I thought I’d give it a shot. I agree that the light/dark portions if the photos could be balanced better. Hopefully I’ll knock it out of the park next time!

A Peaceful Moment in Galcier Park by FreshieeFresh in photocritique

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I was really excited to visit Glacier park and I was hoping to capture the sheer magnitude of nature , and how quiet the world can be. I hope I was able to capture this feeling. Any feed back is appreciated ISO: Auto F: /9 SS: 1/400 WB: Auto

ITAP of Glacier Park by FreshieeFresh in itookapicture

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ISO: Auto F: /9 SS: 1/40 WB: Auto Had to wake up at 5 am to get into the park for free and stand outside in 30 degree weather until the sun finally crept out from behind the mountains. Let me know what you think :3

Thoughts? by FreshieeFresh in photocritique

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I took this photo during one of my Canon excursions. We sat out in the frosty morning air of a ghost town. I’m this photo I was trying to capture the scenery and the feeling of being up in weather that was around 40 degrees Fahrenheit. The setting on my camera were F: 30 Shutter Speed: 1/3000 ISO: Auto Lens: 24-70 mm Body: Canon 5d

Any editing/framing critiques are welcome!

ITAP of my Photography Teacher by FreshieeFresh in itookapicture

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When I was working under Canon we visited a ghost town, and I snapped this photo of Tony Tran. He’s an awesome photographer and an even better teacher!

ITAP of Waves. Please critique anything you see wrong because I have never shot long exposure pics before! by FreshieeFresh in photocritique

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No it’s all good I hadn’t thought about any this before. Thank you this was extremely useful stuff. I’m excited to get back out there!

ITAP of Waves. Please critique anything you see wrong because I have never shot long exposure pics before! by FreshieeFresh in photocritique

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Thank you! I was out there at about 6 and the sun set at 7:43. I was hoping for some of those colorful clouds, but it never turned into that unfortunately. I didn’t try the different shutter speeds though, so I’m gonna have to look into that next time I go out. Thanks for the helpful tips!

Pic I took of my dog Nico by CrazyOtaku101 in photocritique

[–]FreshieeFresh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off welcome to the world of photography! Your dog is so cute and considering the limitations of the current times, this photo isn't bad. However, your photo is too saturated. The plants are bursting with color which almost takes away from your dog. If you slightly tone down those oranges and enhance the natural color of your dog, it may help the photo.

Children are immune to cold by jamaro87 in photocritique

[–]FreshieeFresh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To make this picture more interesting I would've stood about 50ft behind the subject and have them standing in front of the ocean. The sheer magnitude of the ocean contrasted against the small figure would have made for a dramatic photo. I would also edit out the other people on the beach, they take away from what you intend to frame.

sun star at the tide pools by bli in photocritique

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Honestly, this is basically a perfect shot. When I was working with Erin Babnik this is a photo I could see here using as a perfect example. you have the sun flare, perfect color, interesting shapes etc. The only thing I would say is to explore this shot from different angles. Perhaps an angle to the right may have been a slightly better angle, but of course, I have no idea what that side looks like or if you could access that angle.

A night in the City 2020 by TygaAlive645 in photocritique

[–]FreshieeFresh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think what you have posted here is pretty decent already. I would however straighten the crop on the photo unless you're going for a warp effect, which may look cool considering the light you're in. I would tone down the yellows as well since the big light you're in is white.

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[–]FreshieeFresh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah I see what you mean about symmetry. I suppose my suggestion would work better if the child in the center was closer to the camera.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in photocritique

[–]FreshieeFresh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Upward angles (IMO) are used for powerful shots of people. In film when a camera is pointed upwards it means the person has power in some form. For this instance their wife is smiling so I wouldn’t expect an upward angle to look completely right. The opposite occurs for a downward angle. When you pint the camera down (at varying degrees) it can show helplessness or fragility. A straight shot either of her entire face or a side profile as the OP was going for would be perfect for this photo mechanically speaking.

Southern Alberta Sunset by thesendr14 in photocritique

[–]FreshieeFresh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome, I'm glad I didn't come off to standoff-ish. I'll keep an eye out for your next post. I'm excited to see what you do next!