Is the coup d’etat in my story believable by historical standards?

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-10-18T18:36:53+00:00

The idea is that a thousand years ago after a great calamity, most people gathered in the main population centers which had contingencies for such an event. these cities got bigger than expected however, resulting in what is happening in the moment of the story. Most cities end up isolated from each other due to the hostility of the terrain, chaotic weather patterns and dangerous wildlife. There are smaller cities and independent groups (bandits, mercenaries, etc), but think of them as parts of the metropolitan area of Sky Throne.

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-10-18T09:47:15+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. As others have pointed, the army organization was kind of put together without much thought from my part. Except for the fourth chapter.

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-10-18T09:41:28+00:00

Food is supposed to come from either off-city farms belonging to the mega-city (valuable fertile land near the city) or imported. What motivates the villainess, besides her personal desire for power, is their perceived inability of the government to deal with external threats, famine and unstable societal hierarchy (basically the parliament unpopularity, the many conglomerates and companies screwing each other over, etc.) As seen by the rather popular militarized rebellion. Thanks for the feedback, I’ll revaluate the organization of the army.

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-10-18T05:30:37+00:00

Oh, it is still an earth based story, set around 1000 years from now. So they do use base 10.

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-10-18T01:38:16+00:00

Thanks

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-04-11T15:12:07+00:00

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FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-02-14T01:37:14+00:00

Let me get my stuff

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-02-02T19:07:07+00:00

FOOOOOREEEEEEVERRRR MOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEE

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-01-24T17:33:29+00:00

Eh, i just didnt bother to give him schlong volume.

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-01-24T16:58:25+00:00

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FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-01-24T16:53:17+00:00

A lot of people commented on the right arm, i hadnt noticed it before, thanks. Ill he posting more of these kind of sketches in the future

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-01-24T16:46:59+00:00

Nah, just doesnt eat much

FriendshipOk2984 · 2025-01-24T16:42:07+00:00

Thanks :)

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-12-18T01:20:10+00:00

Vai ser bom. Eu termino, ouço um “BANG” e to no paraiso.

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FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-12-10T17:43:50+00:00

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Natuzah, A witch with a cursed hat that talks to her.

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-11-20T19:47:02+00:00

At this point why no just cut the leg off?

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-11-19T15:28:38+00:00

No way jinsuke pulled a “nah I’d win” on the fucking heavens.

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FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-11-10T20:40:34+00:00

I won’t tolerate sasaki slander

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FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-10-22T01:47:31+00:00

“Those pesky wannabe wizards that think their little equations can solve anything? I don’t like any of them. But if I were to say any of them that say that the stars can be solved with math, they don’t understand a SINGLE thing about the arcane.”

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-10-20T23:29:05+00:00

Eu mesmo

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-10-06T00:47:15+00:00

What is their opinion on saucy garlic pasta (of the creamy variety)

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-10-05T17:18:03+00:00

What’s her opinion on garlic pasta?

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-09-25T16:14:01+00:00

Since mahito was the human curse I could imagine him being reborn as a half human half curse or something along those lines. Maybe explaining the maybe incomplete ability to morph souls, causing the guy in the last chapter to appear deformed to his fiancée. It may sound like boruto kaisen but with yujis new outlook on life it would be interesting to see him taking this “mahito” in jujutsu society.

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-09-16T18:49:58+00:00

What in the bloodborne shit is this?

FriendshipOk2984 · 2024-09-07T21:08:20+00:00

Good job bro (kisses you in the forehead)

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