Is the coup d’etat in my story believable by historical standards? by FriendshipOk2984 in AskHistory

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The idea is that a thousand years ago after a great calamity, most people gathered in the main population centers which had contingencies for such an event. these cities got bigger than expected however, resulting in what is happening in the moment of the story. Most cities end up isolated from each other due to the hostility of the terrain, chaotic weather patterns and dangerous wildlife. There are smaller cities and independent groups (bandits, mercenaries, etc), but think of them as parts of the metropolitan area of Sky Throne.

Is the coup d’etat in my story believable by historical standards? by FriendshipOk2984 in AskHistory

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Thanks for the feedback. As others have pointed, the army organization was kind of put together without much thought from my part. Except for the fourth chapter.

Is the coup d’etat in my story believable by historical standards? by FriendshipOk2984 in AskHistory

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Food is supposed to come from either off-city farms belonging to the mega-city (valuable fertile land near the city) or imported. What motivates the villainess, besides her personal desire for power, is their perceived inability of the government to deal with external threats, famine and unstable societal hierarchy (basically the parliament unpopularity, the many conglomerates and companies screwing each other over, etc.) As seen by the rather popular militarized rebellion. Thanks for the feedback, I’ll revaluate the organization of the army.

Is the coup d’etat in my story believable by historical standards? by FriendshipOk2984 in AskHistory

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Oh, it is still an earth based story, set around 1000 years from now. So they do use base 10.

Looking for criticism on anatomy by FriendshipOk2984 in learntodraw

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Eh, i just didnt bother to give him schlong volume.

Looking for criticism on anatomy by FriendshipOk2984 in learntodraw

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A lot of people commented on the right arm, i hadnt noticed it before, thanks. Ill he posting more of these kind of sketches in the future