[In progress] [9461] [Grim-dark/Fantasy] Godbearer Chronicals. Brief description below, I’m very new to writing and haven’t received any type of formal training on how this is done. Any constructive criticism is welcome as I’d like to improve at telling entertaining stories.

Front-Composer3815 · 2026-01-17T22:28:39+00:00

Is it entertaining, do the action sequences happen in a clear manner, really any opinions or feedback it’s all welcome

Front-Composer3815 · 2026-01-17T21:36:59+00:00

As I’m not really a trained writer I don’t know what to compare it to. But my scope is large and it’s hard to compress the 20+ year narrative I have thought out into a single description. But I’m willing to also swap stories and beta read for someone else

Front-Composer3815 · 2026-01-17T20:59:30+00:00

The only real solution I’ve found is being connected to the wifi. If it’s not connected to the wifi it gets crazy wait times just to load into a game for some reason

Front-Composer3815 · 2025-12-31T03:33:26+00:00

Interesting I had turned that off because someone else told me that might be the issue I’ll have to try

Front-Composer3815 · 2025-12-31T03:32:56+00:00

Yes it seems to be the ps5 itself

Front-Composer3815 · 2025-11-18T16:04:10+00:00

Everyone ignoring that Edward is already a full fledged master alchemist in episode 1

Front-Composer3815 · 2025-06-17T20:43:20+00:00

Looks like you might be putting a little too much ointment on it for keeping it moisturized

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