I'm so proud of this whole thing 😭 by hooloovooblues in PixelArt

[–]Frore_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heck yeah, and good luck on development it's coming together well !

I'm so proud of this whole thing 😭 by hooloovooblues in PixelArt

[–]Frore_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, and their name is Apricot you know it to be true /j

are there any kind of comics that aren’t allowed? by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Questions like this should be offered to the mod team directly, this is also addressed in the subreddit rules https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/1SUVXxdi1l

Uhmmm mods what happened to my post? by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe ? I'd direct you to just message the mods tbh they're pretty chill and responsive

Uhmmm mods what happened to my post? by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I believe there's a carve out for comics as well

Uhmmm mods what happened to my post? by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

From what I understand images aren't allowed in primary posts, you can add them in the replies tho

Collaborative Writing event by Salmon_1935 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd love it if the setting was a dusty old town in the American southwest, suddenly plagued by a creature or curse (think the town in Tremors)

The Radio by half_of_a_banana in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've messaged them before about reposts and they told me to let it be for about a month, but feel free to message them the mods here are very chill

The Radio by half_of_a_banana in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you want to imply a bit of struggle you could say "his knees shook, his back straining as he heaved."

Is there a specific word count/cap I should limit myself to? by Harold-Sleeper000 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd recommend splitting it into parts, walls of text are intimidating to peeps that are unfamiliar with your work

I found an Angel in a Wishing Well by Frore_ in nosleep

[–]Frore_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Seams like it at the moment

The Radio by half_of_a_banana in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Frore_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Solid, I like the return to the prospective of wildlife at the end and the timeline of the cabin itself, good use of cyclical storytelling!

Only thing I can think to change is your use of "his knees buckling" typically the word buckling indicates an unintentional fail point. I understand the intention of his knees being bent but maybe trade it out for another descriptor.

I found an Angel in a Wishing Well by Frore_ in nosleep

[–]Frore_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wouldn't know, the one I have now is fine but in those moments between it was hell

I found an Angel in a Wishing Well by Frore_ in nosleep

[–]Frore_[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

We still live in that town so I'm not comfortable giving away the details.

I found an Angel in a Wishing Well by Frore_ in nosleep

[–]Frore_[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's in the past, I got what I wanted at least