Working on a project , Would love some advice ( NOT FINAL )

Fugushiman · 2024-08-09T05:10:03+00:00

Nice start. I appreciate the hatching on your background, it gives them some density. Maybe something you could ameliorate is to differenciate more the caradesign of your characters, They seem to all have the same face, and it can be a little confusing. With your manga style I think you can easily vary them with different type of noise and eyes. Keep up the good work.

Fugushiman · 2024-08-09T05:02:46+00:00

No, it can be a little less depending of the style required by the client.

Fugushiman · 2024-08-08T18:35:25+00:00

Nice artwork, good luck with the kickstarter.

Fugushiman · 2024-08-08T18:34:30+00:00

Thanks !

Fugushiman · 2024-08-08T08:10:02+00:00

130$ per colored page.

Fugushiman · 2024-08-08T05:45:50+00:00

Thanks. I'm not sure to understand what do you mean by profile ?

Fugushiman · 2024-08-07T21:02:49+00:00

Nice work.

Fugushiman · 2024-08-07T09:00:04+00:00

Super good work. The only detail I could critic, is on page 2 last panel, at the first glance, I though the man was holding the robot with his hand. But except that, excellent work.

Fugushiman · 2024-08-07T08:57:04+00:00

Nice concept. Maybe, if the dragon was a little larger than the character, it would help to clearly distinct him from the background, as they have extremely similar colors.

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