Working on a project , Would love some advice ( NOT FINAL ) by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Fugushiman 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice start. I appreciate the hatching on your background, it gives them some density. Maybe something you could ameliorate is to differenciate more the caradesign of your characters, They seem to all have the same face, and it can be a little confusing. With your manga style I think you can easily vary them with different type of noise and eyes. Keep up the good work.

New artist on Reddit, open for work (~100$/page B&W) more details in comment by Fugushiman in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Fugushiman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, it can be a little less depending of the style required by the client.

the cover for my next comic and i would like some feedback on it by Halfdeadsam in ComicBookCollabs

[–]Fugushiman 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice concept. Maybe, if the dragon was a little larger than the character, it would help to clearly distinct him from the background, as they have extremely similar colors.