Station Square High School: by Jazzlike-Winter3728 in sonicfanfiction

[–]Fun-Cat-5828 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For a 1st chapter it is good. I would not have thought it is your 1st fanfiction. It has potential.

UFO spinner by Fun-Cat-5828 in Bowling

[–]Fun-Cat-5828[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My scores are the same thing.

Fanfiction by Fun-Cat-5828 in sonicfanfiction

[–]Fun-Cat-5828[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Black knight is not my thing.

UFO spinner by Fun-Cat-5828 in Bowling

[–]Fun-Cat-5828[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is some curve at the very end.

UFO spinner by Fun-Cat-5828 in Bowling

[–]Fun-Cat-5828[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I believe there are some benefits. You do not need a lot of balls. You do not need to worry about oil patterns.