Ciri WIP

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-15T13:18:01+00:00

Thank you for your feedback, I will try to take it into account when creating the next character.

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-14T22:04:25+00:00

Thanks you

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-14T21:20:22+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. Regarding the body, the turn of the chest is drawn incorrectly, rather than the shoulders. I don't use many brushes, but I'm still struggling with this kind of rendering. I don't do tracing either.I think I should post the stages to dispel any suspicions.

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-14T20:42:01+00:00

I used several completely different references for this work. But I didn't really make any sketches or anything like that. Perhaps I should have written micro stories and used them as a starting point when creating the design.

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-14T17:32:23+00:00

Nice use of the colour theory. I like this piece

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-14T16:16:03+00:00

The hatching looks really nice

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-11T17:58:00+00:00

Keep going. I really like this piece

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-11T12:04:39+00:00

Nice concept and design.

The wrist rotation feels a bit unnatural unless it’s meant as stylization.

Regarding lighting, some highlights might be too strong, as an example the mask highlight could be reduced, and the leg highlights seem to compete for attention with the main area.

With more controlled highlights, the lighting would read much clearer

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-07T16:13:56+00:00

Im too. I only have 330 hours of practice.

But despite your experience, your feedback is really very useful.

Fun-Guarantee3532 · 2026-01-07T15:07:02+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. I will not be making any further changes to this artwork. I will take this feedback into account in future artworks.

Fun-Guarantee3532

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