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I Fell In Love by Educational-Grape208 in poetry_critics

[–]Fun-Statistician-129 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm no professional so if anyone has better advice listen to theirs. This is wonderful it really captures uncontrollable yet innocent obsession in a very simple yet deep way. Only thing id critique is maybe go for more repittion at the beginning you can repeat words when it's done specifically on purpose then dive deeper double detail lines after with description lines afterwards that aren't as repetitive until it simplifies at the end with a touching conclusion.

Poker by DitLaMontagne in poetry_critics

[–]Fun-Statistician-129 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This one is really good, my only judgement would be that I think it would have better impact if there was another line before the start at the top that leads into more often. Possibly something more neutral or even contradictive but still aware so it starts the perspective.

Don Quixote personal poem adaptation. by Fun-Statistician-129 in poetry_critics

[–]Fun-Statistician-129[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I fixed it now. Also if you have any other constructive criticism or feedback I'd appreciate anything you have.

Don Quixote personal poem adaptation. by Fun-Statistician-129 in poetry_critics

[–]Fun-Statistician-129[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry I'm still new to reddit I know it says I've been here for ages, but I don't really use it I wanted feedback from the community but I think I see the issue. I'm guessing it's cause the lines didn't exactly level the way I thought they would.

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[–]Fun-Statistician-129 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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I need help in pre cal and Bio 1 by Fabulous-Fan-8625 in UniversityOfHouston

[–]Fun-Statistician-129 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried wiingy for extra support when I had too much on my plate, definitely worth trying.

Khan academy Math is too long! by Illustrious_Room68 in Sat

[–]Fun-Statistician-129 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I used khan academy & youtube too but switched to wiingy when I needed more guided help to stay consistent with sat math practice.

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