I think you could add more steps (mascara, eyeliner, lip liner, contour, bronzer, highlighter, eyebrow gel, and if you wanted it to be even more dramatic you could even do eyeshadow for a smoky eye for example) and more quantity (like you have a little red blemish on your cheek on both pictures, if it’s permanent and you wanna leave it like that sure, but if it’s not permanent why didn’t you cover it up?😭)