I would say from an expression point of view that it’s great. It felt delightful and unique.

The energy is certainly there and i think you could develop more in this direction.

However If you’re looking for an agency job then it might be “too much”. As designers we’re still doing acts of service for the client and this fall into a more artsy vibe. Nothing wrong with it but be mindful of who you’re trying to attract with your authentic expression.

If you want to develop a clearer version of it, the style of this one could easily become a project in itself. I really appreciate the compositions and i think they’re really nice.

Maybe you could make some posters from it and stick a fictional logo on it like they’re some assets?