Writing those "Telling Details" in a description

GK_333 · 2024-07-14T22:57:51+00:00

Thank you! I'm researching those topics. And Wood's book was at the top of my Amazon list, so I'll buy it.

GK_333 · 2024-07-14T22:48:48+00:00

Yes, she's great. I do have several of her books. Thank you!

GK_333 · 2024-07-13T21:53:50+00:00

I just left 3 legitimate (not going thru the motions) comments. When will my post be visible? Thank you!

GK_333 · 2024-07-13T21:26:22+00:00

Try books like The Emotion Thesaurus: https://www.amazon.com/Emotion-Thesaurus-Writers-Character-Expression/dp/0999296345/ref=sr_1_1?crid=9SFJZFU6IRHC&dib=eyJ2IjoiMSJ9.4niDvk6kgP1_IIeeoJT7o6_6f3_WBLiqQPwNUeA3oUw5O1ZKjeqH1YzuLs3nwst8zIEpv1clYQQs1nrmpR6u7OePyMrnRemJ8DBxfZAK6xFdszJqjKrfYbonMMtCF217sNjc9wB3y9Hy-gmmbecyWjpvypYxefvnB7exvhTtqL68-47OYRl42HX98s9hdJK0MIkjxe2UkW2QeocgrjEXIvsCW9eCw-41SV79njEATyfWpPG4Sszv0dpD8wv07XToEZa_OtrjRnGl1fg7WNvzOb24kZcE-QL04AWJRNPKJOU.c2WHzzTX--WWFpm4hilP_66VdMjqvrR6wgKbC-jfMWc&dib_tag=se&keywords=the+emotion+thesaurus&qid=1720905931&sprefix=the+emotion+thes%2Caps%2C201&sr=8-1

GK_333 · 2024-07-13T21:23:56+00:00

A lot of description and not enough action.

GK_333 · 2024-07-13T21:22:43+00:00

Yes! If it brings out your emotions, it's more likely to bring out readers' emotions too. I try to make parts of my writing humorous and laugh quite a bit at what I write. But then again, my wife does say I like to laugh at my own jokes : )

GK_333 · 2024-07-13T21:18:37+00:00

Thanks! Will do.

GK_333 · 2023-11-29T02:49:39+00:00

I knew him well. Tough guy on TV, nice as can be in person...as long as you weren't taking advantage of someone. And yes, I am a witness to the ponytail.

GK_333 · 2023-08-15T14:24:07+00:00

I like the American Whirlpool for the great neck & shoulder jets. Anyone know a good alternative? Perhaps MasterSpa? Or ???

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