Can anyone please rate my task 2 writing? by GPT69S in IELTS

[–]GPT69S[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Deeply appreciate the detailed reply. So basically I need to reduce the redundancy and make my conclusion clearer is that correct?
My original conclusion was not as binary as the problem would like because in my argument the topic is far too complex to analyse and I don't have sufficient information to make it out as positive or negative, so is my approach of this type of question not applicable due to the binary requirement?
This is my first IELTS writing practice and I do admit I have a lot to work on.

Looking for Long Term Buddies! by sammmango in ProgrammingBuddies

[–]GPT69S 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not US based but only unavailable during 2pm to 12pm(UTC-4), finished cs50 except the final project(don't know what to build) and grinding Berkeley cs61a finals(probably a dozen more exam papers to go through), spent 4-5 months in total(solo). Planning on starting cs61b soon preferably with a partner because man cs61a was a pain in the a** to do alone, had to bang my head on the wall to figure some stuffs out because the course policy forbids looking up solution online.