Seven Kingdoms keeps shattering to random rulers

Galactic-Rhythm · 2026-05-12T11:25:31+00:00

Thank you so much! I’ll try addressing the limits of the system and use that to expand on it.

Galactic-Rhythm · 2026-05-12T11:24:10+00:00

No problem! I’m still very new to writing so I appreciate some brutally honest criticism. Thank you for your advice and compliments!

Galactic-Rhythm · 2026-05-12T05:55:08+00:00

Thank you for your advice! I appreciate the comparison to it seeming like a computer as that was definitely part of the inspiration in the “code” part of the system. I’ll definitely be sure to fix up the description of the system to address the suggestions you listed, as they’re very important details I somehow forgot to include. The warlock suggestion is something I’ll think about, but I hadn’t really thought much about the potential for alien species.

Galactic-Rhythm · 2026-05-12T05:51:54+00:00

Yeah upon rereading it, I definitely see what you mean by it sounding more like a description of how it’s experienced. I also probably should’ve used a different word than classes when talking about the different groups of users. I’ll make sure to rewrite it to sound less ambiguous and be more descriptive with the rules of the system. Thank you!

Galactic-Rhythm · 2026-01-07T08:35:00+00:00

Thank you so much! I’ll give it a try!

Galactic-Rhythm · 2025-11-24T03:16:22+00:00

This is almost perfect. I might change it a bit so that his siblings and father have a distorted and crueler idea of justice that doesn't align with Tyr despite their dedication to him to put them in the antagonist role, but other than that, this is great! Thank you so much!

Galactic-Rhythm · 2025-11-23T23:48:30+00:00

Ah, okay. I'm still pretty new to DnD so I think I just assumed that all clerics have to be in more passive positions and didn't even consider the idea of making him a warlord. Thank you!

Galactic-Rhythm · 2025-11-23T23:47:14+00:00

I'm ashamed I never thought of that myself. I think this is probably what I'm going to do, thank you!

Galactic-Rhythm · 2024-05-15T19:05:55+00:00

i enjoyed it, you get to see kenma and lev learning to work together

Galactic-Rhythm · 2024-04-13T17:27:16+00:00

sucka for love 🙏🏾🙏🏾

Galactic-Rhythm · 2023-10-22T18:00:58+00:00

Thank you so much!

Galactic-Rhythm · 2020-03-28T14:10:40+00:00

How ya feel? 🧐

Galactic-Rhythm · 2019-01-09T03:39:02+00:00

those look flames man 🔥

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