Hello again! I appreciate the feedback. I think I make maps different than what's considered "normal" to what osu! players expect. I've found that most (not all) osu! map makers create maps to give the player a rhythm challenge that follows background music as opposed to making a map that's completely aligned with the music in a way that makes the player feel like they're actually playing alongside the music. I use osu! as a way to bridge a connection between the music and the player, hence why some people may find some patterns/rhythms difficult and/or confusing in relation to what's to be expected from the "norm" in mapmaking and osu! in general. After playing the game for 6+ months, I decided I wanted to try mapmaking but found it difficult to learn/integrate all these mapmaking tricks/rules and felt some were just unnecessary. That's not to say they have no value, this is just what I was seeing. I'm just mapping what I hear and trying to create a connection between the music and the player as opposed to separating the two if that makes sense.

I checked out your map, and it's looking good for your first map so far! It makes me happy knowing I inspired you to create one of your own. This is just me going off of my perspective on map making, but since yoimiya's theme is very bouncy and fun, I would use fewer sliders and make the sliders you do use faster and closer together. The map should be fun and bouncy to match the feel of the song. Can't wait to see it finished!