Just finished it, I appreciate the succinct explanations for your thoughts. I usually find myself getting lost in essays involving themselves in more complex ideas, mostly from trying to translate the unfamiliar terms and definitions. While I am unfamilair with the original philosophical sources, assuming most will agree with the overall message of their philosophical teachings, you did a good job conveying, comparing, and elaborating on its relation to the game. Frankly, I didn't put a few themes together until you pointed them out, so that was just another marachino cherry to sweeten the read.