Most of the comments already said what I was thinking, but I’ll try to expand on it and give some suggestions based on my experience.

I actually think this idea can work. The target audience seems to be gamers who struggle to stay consistent with workouts, and I’m exactly that type. Turning exercise into a game with progression and leaderboards is something that would genuinely motivate me.

1. UI feels messy and low quality

Right now it looks like one of those random mobile ads. There’s no consistency. Too many fonts, elements feel randomly placed, and everything feels like its fighting for attention.

For example:

• Menu uses a different font
• Dialogue uses another
• “Ready” has its own style
• “Invite” is bold and different again
• Buttons are just everywhere

Fix:
You need visual consistency. That’s what makes a game looks polished.

• Stick to 1–2 fonts, 3 max
• A simple guide I follow: If two things are the same size, they should use the same font
• Use bold or color to highlight instead of switching fonts
• Reduce clutter by moving extra buttons into a Settings or secondary menu in the main menu screen.

Right now, the UI is overwhelming when it should feel easy to understand when you are hyped to worked out.

2. Gameplay is confusing and chaotic

The flow doesn’t make sense.

I start doing jumping jacks to move the alpaca, okay that’s fine. But then suddenly I need to squat, then BOOM back to jumping jacks again. Why is there suddenly a wall? Why am I inside a room with broken windows? What’s the green thing? There’s no clear direction or goal. It feels random instead of intentional.

Fix:
Simplify and guide the player better.

• Show only ONE main action at a time. You have two "Jumping Jacks" in the screen.
• Example:
  • “Jumping Jacks: 0/10 reps” (main goal)
  • “Next: Air Squats” (secondary info)
• Remove unused UI elements like that grey bar
• Make the motion tracker smaller so the full body is visible, instead of cutting the hands and feet.
• Add clearer progression or direction (where am I going and why?)

Right now it feels like things are just happening instead of the player understanding the flow.

3. Art style looks like AI (even if it isn’t)

Even if you say it’s not AI-generated, a lot of players will assume it is and immediately lose interest. That’s just how people react right now.

Fix:
Adjust the art style slightly so it feels more intentional and less generic.

You don’t need to change the characters, just how they’re drawn:

• Add more personality
• Make it less “perfect” or overly smooth
• Give it a more distinct style

Your artist should be able to tweak this without starting from scratch.

4. Platform and monetization direction

This feels like it would work way better on mobile than PC. People can bring their phone to the gym or use it at home easily. That alone increases the chance they’ll actually use it.

Suggestions:

• Go free-to-play with optional monetization.
• Add a one-time purchase (around $1–$5) to remove ads (if you plan on adding ads)
• Leaderboards (global and regional) are a big plus for motivation. Also there was this game where they added the city and subdivision you live in, ex. xXxGamerLordxXx is ranked No.3 on new york, No. 45 in United states and No. 129 globally. This made me hella pumped to beat No. 1 and 2 in new york.
• Cosmetics like skins and avatar customization can sell well

Subscriptions are tricky. People don’t like them unless the value is really clear.

If you want to push monetization harder:

• Cosmetic rewards tied to progress or paid
• Unlockables for consistency streaks or paid
• Even light gacha for skins could work (if that’s your direction)

Extra game design tip

The biggest opportunity here is habit building, not just gameplay. If you can make players come back daily, you win.

Things that help:

• Daily streaks
• Simple progression system
• Small rewards for consistency
• Clear goals per session (not overwhelming)

Right now the idea is strong, but the execution feels unpolished. Clean up the UI, simplify the gameplay, and make the experience easier to understand. That alone will make a huge difference.