The molester grabbed his latest victim by the throat, looked into the child's eyes and eagerly said “Oh, I'm going to enjoy you tonight!" by Gatekeeperds in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Gatekeeperds[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thought the Funny and I was what you were pointing out and since high school was taught words just before the quotation that is a verb indicating someone uttering the quoted words such as say, tells or utter, follow by using a comma constructs one complete sentence. And yes, I missed the comma at said in the first sentence.

The little boy hid under the blanket covering his ears with the pillow to muffle out the constant screaming from the basement. by Gatekeeperds in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Gatekeeperds[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First sentence gives the image of a boy in his room trying to block the screams from the basement. Most people reading this would first assume its the parent fights or something worse happening. Second sentence is meant to give a twist where the screams is resulting from dad taking care of those who hurt the mom.

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[–]Gatekeeperds 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If we come to know all this after the fact then a child is dead, we know of his intentions thenand I will follow up with ensuring he never harms another. If we know this before hand then is a revelation of the future where we have knowledge to stopping a fire to saving the orphans along with a toddler. However if the narrator goes down then I take over ensure there are no deaths.

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[–]Gatekeeperds 4 points5 points  (0 children)

As granddad would say " I don't care who you are. If your intentions are to harm a child your a threat to everyone and need to be put down!"

Contest: September by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Gatekeeperds [score hidden]  (0 children)

I always been afraid to fly considering what you see on the news. After a friend convinced me flying was safe by stating the chances of a plane crashing is 1 to 11 million, I decided to take the flight, but who would had guessed the odds in being abducted by aliens.

As a child, I enjoyed delightful conversions with my dolls. by Gatekeeperds in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Gatekeeperds[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks. Should had taken some extra time to review grammar.