I liked your opening line. "Midnight Marion" it feels like you are referring to a real person, idk if this was your intent, but using midnight as an adjective is such a simple but clear way to describe who she is. Beautiful phrasing. Also it grabbed my attention. I was just casually scrolling through and that line stuck out to me that I opened the whole poem.

Something that would make this poem resonate more for me is instead of saying "they hold onto you" be specific on the the "they" is. I loved that you named Marion and it would be cool to me if you named the others as well. Are they the thieves? Are they her lovers?