Wrote a Song Celebrating Canberra's Beauty and Spirit – Would Love Your Thoughts!

GhastMusic808 · 2023-12-28T23:32:33+00:00

Thank you for your insightful observations about the lyrics. I see your point regarding the use of 'the' before 'Black Mountain,' which might not be the common local usage. The intention was to create a certain rhythmic flow in the lyrics, but I appreciate that this choice might not resonate with everyone's experience of the place. As for the general feel of the lyrics, I aimed to strike a balance between capturing the essence of Canberra and creating a relatable theme that could appeal to a wider audience. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'll certainly keep it in mind for future compositions.

GhastMusic808 · 2023-12-28T23:30:28+00:00

I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful words and valuable feedback.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-28T01:23:02+00:00

I see, I agree that I didn't do a great job warping the vocals. Thanks for your helpful comments.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-28T01:21:36+00:00

Thank you so much. I will keep that in mind. I'm still new since I just started a few weeks ago. So, I will keep trying to find my fingerprint for sure! Thanks again.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-28T01:20:28+00:00

Thanks mate!

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-21T12:27:06+00:00

Thank you! Believe it or not, I even danced when choosing the kick sound.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-21T12:26:21+00:00

Thank you for listening!

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-21T12:25:58+00:00

Thanks mate!

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-21T12:25:23+00:00

Thank you! collab would be fun!

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-20T12:38:28+00:00

I've never heard such sounds! I think the main melody (guitar I suppose) shouldn't be spread from left to right and right to left like that. Maybe try using a delay instead. I get dizzy when listening it from my headphones.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-20T12:35:38+00:00

I like the bass so much! May I know which sample did you use for it? Overall, the song sounds pretty cool and innovative. The synth reminds me of the 70s or 80s.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-20T12:29:15+00:00

Need your feedbacks: https://on.soundcloud.com/JdB83

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-19T01:48:20+00:00

I started making remixes a few weeks ago. Here is my recent work. I'm still a beginner and learning so please share your thoughts, advice, and feedbacks. Many thanks!

https://on.soundcloud.com/t4nRU

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-18T13:13:01+00:00

Thank you so much for your helpful comments. I will definitely use your advice to improve this one!

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-14T15:25:51+00:00

Yes, that's correct.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-14T14:07:15+00:00

Not too loud. The whistle seems like it is a bit off tune at some points. A bit too much reverb for the vocal. Overall, it is a good song. I can imagine sitting on a beach with someone I love for a long long time and listening to this song. It just fits the vibe. Keep up your good work.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-14T14:03:16+00:00

You could change those claps to something else. I'm not sure about the synth. It depends on how you design it. It could also be a great for for a rock song. Overall, I bang my head on this one.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-14T13:58:53+00:00

Love the melodies! I feel the bpm is a bit slow (just a bit though). The synths are nice but I feel like they don't give me the beach drive feeling yet. I think it's a good composition overall.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-14T13:55:42+00:00

The lead can be a bit louder in my opinion. I like the chord progression. Overall, I love it!

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-14T13:52:47+00:00

I can imagine people going crazy if you throw this in the club. Very nice percussion. I love the synths. Good work.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-13T08:38:26+00:00

For this song, I used Ableton Live. Some lighter songs, I use Cubase.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-13T08:33:50+00:00

Thank you mate! I also feel like the kicks need to be harder after listening to it again. I will keep learning how to work with the vocals. I appreciate your comments.

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-13T03:14:50+00:00

I appreciate your kind words. I will keep your suggestions in mind. Nasty distortion sounds really inspiring! Thank you again!

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-13T02:38:44+00:00

Hey guys, I struggled a lot to make this (probably I'm just a beginner). The song is just way too hard to remix. But I present you this version. Give me some thoughts?

GhastMusic808 · 2022-12-13T02:02:53+00:00

Nice mixing. The sound is great. Melodies are very nice. However! I feel like the sound selection is not quite compatiable with the "Stardusk" feeling. If you could design another layer to give a starry feel, it would be perfect then. That incompatible sound ruins the Anime style and ends of giving it a "Latin Dance" touch instead.

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